Daisy: Character developement

"Hello!" A black haired woman announced. "I see you found your way to the character developement! What seems to eb the problem?"

"Where do I begin. First of all, I need a better personality. Secondly, I need a better physical appearance."

"Oh, I see. Is this the only place you'll be visiting?"

"oh no. I still need to improve my storyline, and find a better plot. And that's just the begining."

"Well then. Just step right this way and you can improve all those things."

"Ok. Thanks for the help. By the way, you don't seem to have somewhere to eat, do you?"

"Well, that is up to you. If you need to add that as a part in your story, then let it be so. All you need is in the room on my left. Or is it my right? No, I'm certain it's my left. Just step into the room on my left and let the dieas flow. It may seem confusing, but don't worry. You'll make itaround. Just remember. This place changes all the time. Never trust your sense of direction. Do you have a map?"

"Well, I did have one, but it got lost. Could I get a new one?"

"Of course. Here you go."

With the crinkled map in my hand, i entered the room and began my long journey to make my story better. The only question is, can I do it?

"oh, well, there's only one way to find out." I mumbled to myself, with a grin slightly fading on my face. "I just have to keep myhead held high. with posotive thinking, I can make it through this world and find my way back to my regular story."

The End

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