The train came out of the long tunnel into the snow country.

My hands were turning ice cold. (I have brown eyes, pale skin and blonde hair.)

I could feel my breath on my hands as i tried to warm them.

The train then skidded to a halt.

I went out of the train and on to the platform.

I spotted at once a cute boy with pale whitish skin, strange brown-redish eyes wearing a gold crest, yellow top and yorkie trousers.

My heart skipped a heart as i looked at him.

I bravely walk towards the boy.

As I did, I caught his scent.

He smelled cream, bread and honey.

"Hi" I said to him.

"hey" he replied.

His voice was light and snowy.

when he talked, a wisp of mist came from his mouth.

Once we introduced each other, we headed off to Moonlight park to seen the moon together.

I felt happy to be with him, once I had met him.

The stars and sun when out in the sky shined in agreement.

He was the one but would he last?

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Entry by Gracelove

For the 2012 Winter Prose Competition, competitors were given writing prompts to come up with a two chapter short story.

Details on the competition can be found here. All of the entries can be found in the Read section of the Seasonal Prose Competition group.

updated Jan 1 '01 by SeasonalProseCompetition