Prologue

"Something is coming through a side dimension!" Shouted a dark haired woman sitting at a console that was now blinking warning signs all over it.

"What?" Said a man who had to be in his late thirties wearing a dark cloak and carrying a scythe typically depicting a reaper,"Seal the gate! Now!" He barked as he looked over the woman’s shoulder,"Seal off all exits and entrances! And tell me where they're are going to come through." 

"Sir the Breach is manifesting in the right atrium for eternal punishment afterlife."

"Thank you, get all able bodied Reapers down their immediately Kera!"

"Sir we sealed off one of the trainee's in the afterlife."

"We'll deal with that later!" The man barked  bring his scythe down causing a small explosion. The man disappeared through the cloud of dust leaving a pile of debris in the middle of brightly lit room composed of a few rows of consoles and mostly white.  The woman soon followed suit of the man, unknowingly about to meet her demise in the afterlife.

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Joey Faron
age:17
apearance: Slim with a nice tone of muscles, Short wavy sandy blond hair, with a set of bright green eyes. slightly tanned skin complexion. Likes to wear orange t shirts with gleaming black jackets, and black jeans.
Personality: Headstrong, Defiant, Moderately smart, wants to do right.
History: His mother was killed giving birth to his younger brother when he was 6, his younger brother died of cancer at the age of ten. When he was alive he could catch the outlines of locked souls.-chimerakiller2

Jim Reaper
age: Dunno, looks like a teen.
Appearance: Wears classic reaper uniform, black hood, black cloak, black clothes (tunic and pants with black boots, soft) Carries a sword. A scimitar, that arabian one. Dark hair, black eyes, pale skin. Skinny and average height.
Personality: Serious, talkative, acts human, not reaper-like at all.
history: He's new to the reaper business.-Jsimmons

Melodie Parks
Age:17
Appearance: Brunette, green-blue eyes, a bit on the short side, thin. Usually wears jeans and a denim jacket,
Personality:Good natured, can read people very well. She can see the lost souls wandering around her home town, however, she has never been afraid of them, she sometimes feels sorry for them, but tries to block them out as much as possible. Despite her good nature she has few human friends, she tends to get along better with animals -Mcayla

Illianna Dianne
Age: 16
Appearance: of medium height. Is stronger than she looks. She has light blonde hair and green eyes. He wears a light blue top with short sleeves. She wears a comfy pair of blue jeans. Has white running shows on.
Personality: is very talkative and is found annoying by people. She can't understand why. She appeared dim but is actually really smart. Has a short temper
History: was abandoned as a child by her father who hated her because her mother died giving birth to her. She was shoved away to an orthanage where she gained a reputation. People learned to leave her be or regret it. She got in an argument with a mysterious guy. He is continually tormenting her-Elf

Éire Patrice
age:17
apearance: Slim and tall. She has dead straight jaw lenght brunette hair and silver eyes. She likes to wear day dresses on every occasion.
Personality: Éire is stubborn and likes getting what she wants. Her mind is always thinking of anything but the task at hand. She is very book smart but says exteremly stupid things.
History: Éire had a brilliant life - Good grades, good friends and a very loving family. That was until a tall man dressed in black clothes decided to murder her brutally. Now she remains as a locked soul wander the earth looking for a reaper. -Literally-Exquisite

Allyshia (Ally for short) Hale
Age: 26
Apperance: Short jet black hair, wears ripped black jeans, studded belt, black biker boots with silver buckles, black leather jacket with shoulder and wrist studs. She's 6'2 with lithe muscles, wears alot a dark makeup, heavy eyeliner and bloodred lipstick. She has septum, eyebrow, and lips peircings.
Personality: Very broody and morbid. Has a short temper fuse but has moments where she goes out of her way to be nice.
History: Was raised in a normal family, had a nice life, well treated. She turned goth at the age of 15 when her bestfriend was killed by a drug overdose. She's street smart but not book smart. -Li17

updated Dec 13 '11 by chimerakiller2