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I could hear the sirens coming. So many bodies were dragged out that day. We were even on the news.

"Two teenagers call the police when they watch a train crash in the middle of a subway."

So many lights. And blood. And crying.

When me and Jerry were sitting on the subway bench, with all of our friends and family there, it dawned on me.

We never did find out who killed Ally Prior. And what's going to happen when i'm moving.

Well...we'll just have to find out now won't we.

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Hummingbird Plot
A girl called Ally Prior was murdered in a Subway Station on January the 18th, 2009, basically anyway.

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When a new character joins, the first chapter they write will be the memories of Ally, and then they can jump into the story. If you need some help on what to write the memories about, you can look at SomebodysAngel's chapter 'Wake Up Call'.
When joining the story, you can be any character that you wish. A close friend of Ally's, Ally's teacher, A police men, even the murderer if you want!



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