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In this Story, you are getting on the Titanic on either a port in London, Ireland, or France. You will either be in 3rd, 2nd, or 1st class on the Titanic. If you are 1st class, then you are very very very rich. 2nd class is alittle less rich than 1st class. If you are 3rd class then you are considered poor and crap. 1st class people can't talk to 2nd class or 3rd class because then you will looked down apon. That is what you call prejudice.

"Oh no," said Shirley Huim. Glancing at my older brother, Jeramiah Huim, and me, Elizabeth Huim. As my brother glaced at our money, he gasped.

"Lizzie... We don't have enough for... For..." He was stuttering again.

"It's fine brother," I said shakly, " M-maybe we left some at h-home?" I turned around and sat on the bench to think. Hello, my name is Elizabeth Huim, I have bright green eyes and brown hair. I live in Ireland. They say that the Titanic is going to come in a few hours. My family is poor and we don't have enough money for my mother, brother, and me. We only have money for 2 people, my mother and brother. I sighed, brushed back my hair, smoothed out my dress because my mother said that's what ladies do. "But I'm only 5 years old, I'm no ladi," That was a year ago. Now I'm six.

A young man with fine clothes walked up to me and handed me a piece of paper.

"Here, I heard that you couldn't go," he said with a wink. I opened to paper to see what it was.

"Oh!" I said with a gasp. I can't read ot write, but I know money when I see it. I looked around for that young man, but couldn't find him. I jumped off the bench and ran as fast as I could for mother.

"Mother! Mother! Look!" I showed it to her and I saw tears streaming from her eyes.

"Oh Lizzie, where did you get it?" she asked. Still crying.

"A young man gave it to me," I answered.

"Oh, where is he!?" she asked yet almost yelled. Jeramiah walked up and said "Mother, they're boarding the ship, let's go?"

The End

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Elizabeth Huim
Author: Narissa
Looks:Brown Hair, green eyes, poor, wears colorless clothes.
Personality:Doesn't know about the no talking to upper class, loves animals, see's things in a bright way until after the sinking, doesn't kn0w how to read ot write.
Info: Father died a year before the Titanic was finished. Doesn't know why they are going to America. No schooling.
Family:Shirley and Jeramiah(They die except Eli/Lizzie)
Class:3rd
Age:6

Thomas Bird
Author:Owlhaven
Age:22
Looks:Dark ish brown hair alittle longer htan short, brown eyes
Info:Engaged to Eliza Collyarrow, doctor, not interested in the height of fashion, from Ireland
Family:None on the ship
Class:1st
Eliza Collyarrow
Author: Owlhaven
Age:20
Looks:light brown hair that flows in the wind,hazel eyes, normally waers a colorful gown
Info:Thomas Bird's Fiance' respects the "lesser" people,from Ireland but schooling in France

Jacqueline Broussard
Author:Woldwind
Age:19
Looks:Long golden hair that falls down in ringlets,wears bright beautiful gowns but not because she wants to.
Personality:Htes hwo she is a 'higher class' and doesn't see the difference between higher class and lower class. A fun-loving girl who would rather be running around then attend a tea party with other snotty ladies of the 1st class area
Family:Aceline & Mederic Broussard
Class:1st

Margo Daust
Author:AmberGlass
Age:16 almost 17
Looks:Female,Dark red hair that falls to shoulders in curls, gray eyes. Noramally wears a white dress,sometimes wears a woolen coat-dress
Info:Traveling to U.S. to be a Tutor of English and French, is going to teach a young girl from a weathly family. Margo is quiet and well-mannered. Loves teaching but wants to be a Journalist. Is from London, but fluent in French.
Family: Orphaned at a young age, she was at a highly respected boarding school &home for girls.
Class:2nd

Winna Ward
Author:iamkathybrown13
Age:16
Looks:Short, white hair with a few strands of black. A round face and a bit dumpy. Wears glasses and a long cotton dress with a jacket.
Info: Is going to her aunt's house so she can school in America.
Class:2nd

Branson Wolf
Author:SageMoonBlood
Age:21
Looks:Black shaggy hair with violet eyes. Normally seen wearing pants and a nice shirt with a jacket.
Personality: Very daring. Never pays attention to the class room and always hangs out with the 2nd and 3rd calss. High spirted.
Info: Traveling to America to start a new life.
Family: His older brother Alastiar Wolf.
Class: 1st

Rebecca Lynd
Author: M.N.M
Age: 9
Looks:Short, skinny, black hair, deep emeralrd eyes, dirt all over.
Story: Parents and most of her siblings are dead. Older brother is successful and is a 2nd class. snuck aboard the Titanic.
Excellent liar, and theif. Only lies half the time.
Class: 3rd

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