Venus: Warning bellsMature

The film was... Um... good? Bad? I don't know, it was a bit far feched. I mean robots, taking over. As if that's ever going to happen.

"So, did you like the film?" Ed asks, nudging my arm. Roo and Lolly are talking closly together, Em is holding hands with a random Jo. I think that's his name too.


"Yeah, I know, but far feched 'eh?"

I laugh, "Yeah. Where are we all going now?"

"To the beach!" Em whoops from the front. I shake my head, laughing.

"Oh yeah, we need to chat with someone..." Ed says, tailing off playing with his dark hair.


"Ah, just my boss."

"Oh? Is he nice?"

"Meh," his hand slips around mine, I glance down at it and smile. I turn to Roo and Lolly, "C'mon guys, don't lag behind." Roo sticks her tounge out at me, I laugh.

We reach the beach, some men surround a small slight man. He turns around, and he looks vaguly familiar.

"Hello...." His voice sends warming bells off in my brain, I look at him carefully as he turns to me. "Do I know you?"

"Who, me?"

"Yes, you." He hisses.

"I-I don't think-"

"What's your name?"


"Huh, I knew someone with a planets name...."

"What's your name?" I ask shyly.

"Don't you know luv? I'm Tommy." The warming bells go off, making my ears fizz. He turns to Ed, "Have you found Mars yet?"

"Nope, I thought this," he holds my hand in the air, "Was her." I pull my hand away, embaressed.

"I thought she was that Mars, too," Em says giving me such a dirty look.

I look between them all, What the hell is going on? Roo and Lolly walk to either side of me.

Stay with us, we'll help you. Roo's voice sounds in my head.

"Why do you want Mars?"

"Because Luv," Tommy starts, "She defided me. She didn't do as I asked."

"Which was..."

"To kill the Legendary child." Roo and Lolly step closer to me, they move slowly backwards pulling me with them. Warning bells sounded as Em, Ed, Tommy and all the guys in black walk towards me. Oh God.

The End

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