The Surrounding Sounds
[ORIGINAL - BY JACK]
I'm falling, what do I do?
Help me, help me, someone please just help me
Can anyone hear me?
I'm hanging in front of the knife, can someone help?
I just slipped off the edge, can someone help?
I only fell, someone must've heard...
The silence kills me
I can't breath, it's killing me,
Someone has to be there!
There's the hand pulling me...
The silence is broken
I'm free, lifted from the grave!
Thank you,
My voice was heard,
I can live; be free.
The End
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Originally by my friend Jack, he asked me to post it on my profile, so I thought I'd make a project of it, with his permission.Should develop into a series of prose poems, if all is carried out well.
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