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The Chosen One

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"Well, Sir... Trooper 1 is my sister, older than me by six millenia. She rebelled against the rule of the Anchient Ones, and, with the help of a budding race called the Humans, banished them to the far corners of existence using trickery and dark magic. Having such an evil sibling is hard on me, which is why I wanted you to come here. If I may, I'd like to express my concern over these recent events. First, I told you that 26 batches of my kind would reach you, yes? Where are they? it is not in our nature to be so late for such an important thing as protecting the chosen one... I mean, you, Sir. I think they were ambushed en route by my sister's forces, which means that she is stronger. Also, your "Green Arrow Man"... well, it could be that he is no man, but an Anchient One enslaved by dark magic- specifically, I think he may be Thorson, who once had dominion over markmanship. Enslaving an Anchient One requires vast amounts of life energy, which means that Trooper 1 has enough of it to summon minions. Also, consider the pit that you found Trooper 2 in. I had runes woven into the fabric of the sling I lowered you down with which protected you, but anyone in there unprotected would at the very least get jolted into another dimension. Hordes of deamons live in there if I am correct as to what it is: The Pit of Tartus. Trooper 2's weakness always was money, and my sister exploited that by putting him in the Cavern of Riches, effectively neutralising him."

"Waitasecond... you telling Me that Me the Chosen One? Thats a lod of BTS (Big Troll Sh*t). Me just a Orc, and didnt do anything special. Yous a big lire: you said that you need majik two get out of the pit , but I falled of and Me did fine! You crazy just like Trooper 2! You lying all the time me bets! 'Can't trust anything you say, you stinky-"

-CRASH!! GRRROAR!BOOM! AHHH! SMASH! THUD!! UFF! Uhhh..-

"What's that?"

Trooper 3 did Not look nice happy... he locked kind of skard, actuly. What ever. Hes a lyer so I don't no, but Me runned in too the other rrom wher the sounds hapend and there was Celttam on the floorand he was flickering like between wolfy and peepole and ther waz blod evrywere and there was firey boys with big fat spears and theys laphing and then dumb old Trooper 3 shouts-

"Qurevok! Don't think about the deamons being destroyed!"

" Whatdya meenMe kant think about it?-"

And just like that snap crackle pop the deamons dide. In the air were they were yu could  cind of see there faces, very suprised. Weird. Also, the hole house was quite know. Me looked back at Trooper 3, and he winked at me with fake brovado.

"That is why you are the Chosen One. I wasn't supposed to tell you unless things became to risky- I think our current situation qualifies. You just killed every deamon in the sanctuary, and sealed off all entrances to Limbo for three or four hours: you aren't even phased."

Me didn't kare, just rushing over two Celttam. Me seed hes ded.

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dottylotti Welcome to The Sanctuary. First I have to be boring and give you some basic rules:

1) You may only enter the Sanctuary if you are a supernatural creature aka Vampire, Werewolf, Faerie etc.

2) The Sanctuary only appears to those in need of protection.

3) Post a description of your character as a comment so I can put it in the guidance.

4) Umm actually there is no number four just post!

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What is The Sanctuary? It's a house in the middle of a forest that is a home and provides protection for supernatural creatures

Characters:
Alanna: a vampire, frozen at 19 but was made a vampire in 1887 (which makes her 123) and has been on the run ever since. She has long black hair that she is always fiddling with and dark violet eyes. Pale skin and long limbs but elegant. Is welcoming but can lose her temper very quickly when she feels threatened - dottylotti

Zander: Permanently looks 24, although is ageing about 1/10,000 that of a human. Meaning he can live for ten thousand years.
Aged: 250
Race: Lii'arc ( A being that can shift through objects , with a second combat ability usually, stretching something existance. In Zander's case is changing peoples existance)
Apearance: Orange hair with red tinges, reaches just above his blue eyes. Wears a long leather jacket he rarely does up. Along with usual wear of a T shirt and pants. Is really nice but will not hesitate to kill if you cross him - chimerakiller

Evelyn: She's an Elf. Never ages past 17 years old, but is really 324 years of age. Her powers are Telepathy, Telekinesis and Time Manipulation (She can pause it and see through it backwards or forwards).
Long ringlet of starlight hair. Light blue eyes that sometimes shift to Light violet. Milky pale skin, thin limbed and petite. Very Friendly, looks totally innocent but can sure fight - CrystalRose

Celestia: Guards the gates on the borders of the Universe from other worlds. There's no actual name for her species, but refers to self as a Guardian of the Borders or just a Gate Guard.
Looks 18 but has been alive since the Beginning. Can control Space and Time if tries hard but doesn't unless it's absolutely necessary as it's very draining, and control the first five elements (Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Spirit) but won't use them on friends. Can also create illusions.
Has white pixie cut hair that sparkles, reflective eyes- one eye is silver but the other is gold- and pale sky blue wings. Average Is bad at socialising and making friends because of her duty, but is a very good friend to have when you get to know her. Also a very dangerous enemy. Don't get on her bad side, you may end up dead. A good fighter - Element

Morna: She is a half vampire, half harpy (you do NOT want to meet her parents). She doesn't look a day over eighteen, but is actually one-hundred-and-five years old.
Her powers: is a natural fighter due to her A) upbringing and B) it's in her blood. Can manipulate people with her voice and eyes. Has super speed, and hightened senses.
Has long, straight hair down to the small of her back. Colour changing eyes, usually a silvery indigo. Clear, almost translusive skin, tall, slim. Looks distant.
Hard to get through her outter shell, but when you have her trust she is really nice - D.Daniels

Fialka: will always look 19
Age: exact age unknown, one of the first vampires.
Race:Vampire
Appearance:Long red hair, black eyes, beautiful but deadly. Porcelain skin. never says much, but has an almost regal heir. The rumour is she used to be a princess before she was changed - Stargazer

Anju: Pure blood Vampire is 15 and wil still age until she reaches 20.Her powers are able to control animals and people, remove their memory and control their emotions
she has long white curly hair with a full fringe that goes into her eyes. Deep purple eyes and change to red when shes mad, thirsty or just fed.
Her teddy Boogie is always with her, he is possed by a killer and makes life alot more fun for anju, he wear a blue strippy top with blu pants he has deep black eyes black shaggy hair and a cheesy grin-moon -willow

Qurevok is an Orc with serious intelligence issues. His mentor is a werewolf named Celttam, who is wise but nearing death. Neither have any specific details about them yet, exept that Qurevok is ugly even for his species (which were the guinea pigs for EVIL's first technologies. Now, seeing one is like seeing a blue moon twice in as many years.) - SilverEye

Lirael: Werecreature. Can phase into any predator but prefers a black she-wolf form. Appears to be around 17 but is in fact older. Super-fast and strong. Can read minds and project her thoughts but perfers not to. Occasionally struggles to control her phasing.
As a human; smokey black curls and usually dressed in an black tank top and jeans. Has a spiralling vine tattoo on one shoulder. In all forms her eyes are an unnaturally bright green. Ex-Hunter - HannaKingdom

Re: Also know as The Reaper. No age but looks about 20 years old. He has no family. His powers are wide ranged but are all based around his duty to run Limbo and make sure everyone dies at there time and goes to the right afterlife.
Dark black eyes, Dark black hair. Tall and muscular. Shadows cling to his skin and his body seems heathy while his skin exceptionally white. Can be cruel but does have a heart - CrystalRose

Left the Sanctuary:
Billie: will always look 17
Age: 21
Race: werewolf
Apearance: short black hair, golden eyes, tanned skin, strong and fast. She has a sort of animal stride to her when she walks and a short temper to go with it. She tries to be in the background but is always noticable by her golden eyes
Power: to feel and control others emotions - H.C.Chapman

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