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Irena: Slitted Eyes

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"Slitted.... eyes..... Gervase. Oh my god" I turned and looked at Gervase and he nodded.

"I worked it out just as I got here. 'Gervase watch out for slitted eyes', that was the message" he said with a nod. Belle's eyes widened as she began to understand.

"We need to watch out for them. Anyway, we need to get going. I spotted a club on my way here that looked familiar. Then I remember its where I picked Paul up one night and he was as scared as hell. I guess we should start there" I say with a stern voice.

I lead them straight to the bar that has a tram stop close to it. I glupped as I heard raving music pounding out from within. "Are we sure this is a good idea?" Belle whispers. I look at her and shrug.

"Its the only clue we got" Gervase said sternly before storming into the bar. I looked at Belle then we scurried to follow him. When we get in there its even worse. There are girls wearing things that just plainly look like underwear. Then the worst, a table across the dance floor in the centre filled with gangster looking men holding guns.

"Guys, those gangsters... they've got slitted" Belle whispers. I focus harder and see she's right.

"Do we avoid them... or talk to them?" I question. No one speaks up and I gesture to the bar. "How about we just keep an eye on them? If one of them breaks off.... one of us should follow him while the others keep watch"

"That's to dangerous. We couldn't take on one of them. Even without the gun" Gervase hissed.

"I could" I tell him. "I'm unbeaten in martial arts and I know how to fight dirty"

"Lets just sit down first" Belle sighed. We go and take a table in the corner just able to see the main table. Although, its hard not to.

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CrystalRose Closed Collab

In the large but cold city of Sheffield there were three scientists. Now they're gone and three of the closest people to them are looking for them.... But they don't know what they'be got themselves into.

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Name: Irena
Age: 19
Missing Love One: Her twin brother Paul
Looks: Raven black hair with sweeping side fringe, flows in tumbles down to hips. Bright sharp and airy light blue eyes, her eyes are wide and open. Athletically built and stand at 5"6.
Personality: Sweet and Gentle but also is a bit goth. Secluded and has a forbidden, natural beauty. Is very outdoorsy and active. She is also very creative and intelligent. Posh-ish accent.
Skills: Can work out any problem. Has trained in karate and kickboxing, can fight dirty and never loses.
Author: CrystalRose

Name: Belinda (Belle)
Age: 18
Missing Loved One: Joe, her cousin
Looks: Just under average height, skinny. Dark brown, shoulder length curly hair that's normally worn with he front parts tied back. Light brown eyes. Very agile.
Personality: Generally cheerful, likes to make friends. Does kind of have her own little world, daydreamer. Knows when enough is enough. Cockney accent, though it varies slightly depending on who she's talking to.
Skill: Very arty, gymnastic/flexible. Notices small, awkwardly hidden things.
Author: AutumnMay

Name: Gervase
Age: 19
Missing Love One: Jane, his girlfriend
Looks: Quite small with a full fringe of black hair that often gets in the way. Dull hazel eyes. Has a good athletic build and is fairly strong.
Personality: Is quite fun loving and cheeky. Takes a laid-back approach to life but knows when to be serious. Loves a good adrenaline rush and is up for trying most things.
Skills: Very skilled free runner and runner.
Author: TheMightyMrDoodle

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