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Aura: Death is in the house.. Hotel

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Shouting - that's what woke me up. I bolted up in bed. Someone in this hotel just died, and I was determined to find out who. Sometimes it pays to be a Soul-Eater... you can sense death so easily. I lept from my cozy bed - not that I needed the sleep - and fumbled with my shoes as I tried to put them on. Tasmia was out somewhere, but that didn't worry me too much.

The first room I went to was Sparx, even though I knew it wasn't him that died. Luckily, it wasn't his... daughter. I spat the word out like it was a disease. It's not so much his daughter I despise, just the fact that he HAS a daughter. I did make sure that they were both sleeping okay, and that the shouts that I head hadn't woken either of them. They hadn't.

I quickly checked on Jane and Regan. Both were safe.

When I passed Mark and Tallie's room, I could sense everything. I could hear the ghosts of Tallie's shouts - feel Mark's dying breath everywhere. It was horrible. I threw open the door, and despite all the carnage I've seen and caused in my life, I screamed. The sight I saw was horrible, and would haunt me for the rest of... forever really.

Tallie was standing over Mark, a crazed look on her face as she held the... Dagger? Stake? over his heart. Marks face was frozen - a mask of hurt and confusion. I couldn't help but stumble away from the horrid scene I came looking for.

Tallie heard me. She whipped her head up and advanced on me - stake in hand.

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DaneTrotter Add your own character, and with every chapter, put your name at the beggining, E.G.:
Mark Blake: BlahBlahBlah. You must introduce your characters, and say what they are, and their history and things. Other than that, welcome to the HH! Btw, the limit of people that you're allowed to make is three.


Characters:

Mark Blake (Male), Vampire DEAD, 1JamesSummer
Jane (Female), Shapeshifter, CrystalRose
Sparx (Male) , Demon, SpookOfNight
Sola (Female), Human, Alis
Regan (Male), Vampire, Alis
May (Female), Telekenetic, cherrywrite DEAD
Tallie (Female), Human/Vampire, 1JamesSummer
Aura (Female), Soul-Eater, Vampyress33
Tasmia (Female), Shadowbeing, Lynnetta
Ravyn (Female), Elf, HannaKingdom
FairLight (Female),
Fairy/Demon, RaHonTheRadio
Astrum (Female), Unknown, MrsCullen

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