What's Wrong?

Jyll looked up as the fire cage around her fanished, and her fingers faded. They were still there, but weak, and the were not working right.  Wondering if something happend, she called out, as flamara told her to. no awnser.  Although, she did not know if any one could hear her, I mean do speach bubbles make noise?  anyway, listening, she herd nothing, it was to quiet, as if the whole world was takeing a breath.  she walked slowy in the direction Flamara went, trying to find her, trying to find anyone really. Again she tried to call out, but no one awnserd.  Suddenly, she herd a huge, jumpout of your skin roar, and watched as a multitude of kitchen appliances came running down the stairs...   

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