Subject Under Fire
Darkness.
I am surrounded by the warm pulsing of an ocean, gently swaying me back and forth. Opening my eyes, I see that I am floating in light orange water stretching as far as my sight reaches. Above me, shafts of shadow break through the surface, almost like light would. Below, the water gradates to a soft green, showing no glimpse of the bottom.
Panic.
I realize, suddenly that I have been holding my breath. As I turn to kick to the surface, A beautiful woman comes into view. Her eyes sparkle like an emerald reef, and her long, ebony hair flows around her like the mane of a fierce lion. She smiles and sinks gently downward, holding out her hand in an invitation.
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Please feel free to add a short chapter with at least two choices afterward.* The character is male
*Write in first-person
*If you can follow my style, that would be great, but I'm just curious to see what people make of this story.
Wow! There are some great chapters being written. Thanks to all the people who are getting involved in this story.
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