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I had been lissioning in on Navie and Evelyn

"Any idea where exactly we're going?" asked Navie

"None at all," evelyn had replied.

A time later Ander called back to all of us.

"Anyone want to volunteer to scout ahead? We just want to make sure there are no humans in the area." Liam, Sarya and navie stepped forward immediately.

"No problem," comented Liam.

"We'll meet you back here" added Nieve, fallowing him into the woods.

"Shouldn't take too long," Sarya said with a waved as she falowed them into the woods. I wached them walk off, and sat down on a bolder taking off the sandels that I ware and musausing my ancel.

`you okay mia` asked Ben

`since when do you care` I snaped, everyone looked shocked as they stared at me, I shighed sitting cross legged on the bolder.

`sorry... just on edge` I told them, we all sat there silintly befor I said

`I was lissioning to what Neive and Evelyn were saying... navie wanted to know where we were headed`

"why are you listening on other peoples conversations" asked Evelyn Quietly.

`I was kinda wondering that myself` said Aven.

We looked at Ander.

`I thought you had an idea of where we were going mia... it was your sugestion to being with, and why dose everyone exspect me to know.` he said they all turnd to look at me.

"Ander" I said he looked up at me "the reason we all turn to you is because we exspect you to be the leader, I`m saprised you didint come to me soner with this question, it`s a good thing when we left we were going in the right derection or else I would have said something soner"

we sat in silince a moment everyone still looking at me exspectently, my parents had been some of the best map makers and scoters our people had, it only made sence that I had there maps and there smarts about all of that. Wolves wernt knowen for our smarts but I belive I was one of the smarter wolves in our "pack" I closed my eyes and fround, thinking back to the time when my parents had left the tribe.

`the day my parents died... we were heading to a sactuary... somewhere someone who has powers like ours go... the place eveything started... where the stone was made... I think thats where we should go...`

`it`s logical` comented ben.

`do you have any idea where that is` asked Avery coolly

`in the mountens`

he gave me a look that said -we need more info then that

I tock out a map and un rolled it.

`why is it staned with blood` asked Aven

`my mother blood... when they ataked her blood spiled over it` I say no emotion in my voice as I surched the map.

`hear` I pointed to the moutens, and traced a line across them with my pointer finger.

I rolled it back up and placed it back in the bag.

Nivie and the others got back just then.

`anything to report` asked Avery

`nothing just stay clear of the east there are a few setelmints over there`

`righto lead on oh fearliss leader` I say to laim who groweled at me.

`I`ll learn my place when I dont have to fight anymore` I hissed at him as we set out on our way.

`guess I know where your loyalty lies then` said laim as we walked at the frount of the group more west.

`I would die for you guys... but I dont want to have to fight, if there is any other chose` I say and walked away, at a fast even pace.

`Mia` they called but I didint listen, I just trudged ahead.

I walking thought the forest at a fast place. soon there voices disaped in the trees and I was running on ahead. my ancel cracking and  hurt a lot but I ignored the pain, useing it to carry on as I always hand. leaning on my walking stick more and more as I nearly ran.

soon my vision became blurred and I had to stop I wiped my eyes and noticed that my hand got wet. as if with dew. tears I had hardly cried in years so why was I crying now. 

I punched a tree, as hard as I could in anger, fustration, pain, but most of all Loss, and it hurt so bad, so bad I could hardly bare it, I fell to my right knee, placed my palms on the ground and closed my eyes.

when I heard a branch break and looked up.

 

 

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CrystalRose Sorry, no more Characters. The plot has been set already

Elves and Wolves have lived together in the forest for millions of years with a truce. Elves mainly being the brains and Wolves the warrior's.
But one day when a young group of Elves and Wolves find a powerful stone. They have to use their powers to excape by orders of the council and hide among humans while staying alive.

http://www.protagonize.com/group/collaborative-corner/topic/2193

Rules

1. Please say BEFORE you write.
2. No powers can be the same. Two species Elves and Wolves.
3. No killing someones character or making a massive change to one without the other writers permission.
4. Elves age one year to three of a human. Wolves age normally. The ages below are their age as their species.

Species

Elf - Pointed ears. Any coloured hair. Sharp teeth. Speed, Hearing and Strength is ten times more powerful than a humans. Age 1 year to every 3 of a human. So an elf at 16 years would be 43 in human years.

Wolves - Has two forms. When in human form only Hearing, Taste and Sight are heightened and can withstand much more force than a normal human. When in wolf form it is much larger than a normal wolf and can comunicate telepathically but can't read minds (So send thoughts but not recieve).


Characters

Name: Evelyn Bluu Luna - CrystalRose
Species: Elf
Age: Sixteen
Gender: Female
Looks: Midnight Black hair, pulled back into a ponytail and has side fringe. Multicoloured eyes. About 5"6 and is muscular. Has sharp features. High cheek bones. Pale skin and seems almost childlike even to elves.
Power: Water
Other: Is the Daughter of the head of Elves on the council, almost like royal blood. Enjoys running and isn't affraid to break some rules.

Name: Mia Stclare - scribeofblood
Species: Wolf
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Looks: Tall. Snow white hair. Dark green gray eyes. Deep red scare across left eye.
Wolf Form:
Power: Fire
Other: Likes to hit people over the head with a walking stick she always carrys and has a right side limp, but is fast and agile. is clever. Doesnt like battle even though she is one of the best warriors.

Name: Aven -emptyanima
Species: Elf
Age: Sixteen
Gender: Female
Looks: Dark hair in a pixie cut and green eyes. Very pale skin and lips which are white in colour (painted white, really just normal). Slender bodied.
Power: Earth (plants)
Other: Has knowledge of edible and non-edible plants.

Name: Liam Blackclaw - Mr.Fisherman
Species: Wolf
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Looks: Tall, muscular, long black hair and dark blue eyes. He is a natural fighter.
Wolf Form: All black with lots of yellow lightning streaks going from his head all the way to his tail. One goes past his eye, and he is blind in that eye, in both human form and wolf form.
Power: Lightning
Other: Hard for him to make friends because of his trust issues. He isnt exactly the most clever one in the pack, he is more brawn than brains. He is the next in line to be the alpha male. Has an unfriendly relationship with his father as he is jealous of his power.

Name: Benjamin - moon-willow
Species:Elf
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Looks: Long bright blue hair to waist, Sharp blue eyes, Tall slim, dresses quit formal, pinted ears and sharp teeth. Pale skin with red lips (natural)
Power: Wind
Other: His Farther is in the council, he is protective of his friends.

Name: Sarya - dottylotti
Species: Elf
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Looks: Straight purple hair which falls to her waist, deep blue eyes, unusually tall and can appear slightly intimidating.
Power: Weather Manipulation
Other: Although she can appear intimidating and the nature of her power can put people off her. Loyal friend once you get to know her and will do anything to protect people she loves.

Name: Nieve (pronounced nee-aay-veh) - xLittleHill TheIrishGirlx
Species: Elf
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Looks: Long, indigo hair, violet eyes, small but athletic build, slightly tanned, tense and alert but smiling, has a tattoo of a snowflake on the back of her neck.
Power: Ice (Freeze's particals)
Other: Has basic knowledge of all weapons and can use any makeshift one.

Name: Alexander (but insists to be called 'Ander' to be "different.") - Euraphrates
Species: Wolf
Age: 18
Looks: Dark, long hair (wavy) and dark brown eyes (kind of big, with some red). He has a normal skin tone and medium build. He's very tall, though, around 6'5.
Wolf form (Only for wolves): Black wolf (not an exact species, but this is it's color)
Power: Earth (Rock manipulation)
Other: Kind of dark personality, but willing to help the ones he loves. Very loyal (doglike).

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