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Angelo

In those few minutes, my mind couldn't make sense of anything that was happening to me. The subconcious felt trapped, almost asphyxiated as I followed the Goshea blindly. She held one of my hands, giving me wordless smiles as she led me deeper and deeper into the forest.

My mind grew hazy, vision blurring up but one thing called to me the most. Desire surged through my veins as I took steps closer to the being, which now appeared more beautiful than ever.

Stop this!

A voice called from within me but all strings of resistence had been cut the moment I'd looked into those eyes. It felt like I was under a spell of some sort, but I didn't know what to do.

Why? Why did I  leave Elia?

The voices grew smaller, weaker and soon I had no control over my body. It was then I heard something, the rustling of leaves. The Goshea turned around, tugging me with her. Her frame grew hostile as she hissed venemously at the person that appeared in front of us.

"Angelo!"

I frowned, snapping out of my deep reverie for a split second to realize what was going on, eyes widening. "Elia?"

And then my body couldn't take it any more. The last thing I heard out was a cry of pain as I fell to the ground, blacking out.

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Trish Closed Collab Between CrystalRose and I

Main Characters

Elia
Age: Unknown but looks 17
Appearence: Long curls of violet hair. Deep Grey eyes that seem to glow in the dark. She has a thin curvy figure but bird like features with flush lips and oval eyes.
Other: She is a quiet girl having never learnt to speak since her civilisation spoke by telepathy. She always excelled in discovering memories from a persons mind.
CrystalRose

Angelo
Age: 20
Appearence: Golden blonde hair accompanied by chestnut brown eyes and a rather rosy complexion. He has a rather boyish face, showing his youth and a lean figure.
Other: Outgoing but cautious, quick-tempered and can be a little possessive. Doesn't like following other people's orders and is rather independent.
Trish

Minor Characters

Rest of the Crew
Florence
Daniel
Samantha
Alexander
Marcus

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