Milly or Sara? Reality or Imagination?Mature


I saw the black floor beneath me as I fell, then CRASH! I landed, twisting my ankle and spraining my wrist. Again. I looked up as a few strands of my blonde hair fell over my face, loose from my ponytail. I gazed around and saw endless nighttime. It was completely black with no light source whatsoever. I stood up and walked around hesitantly with my arms held out in front of me.

I carried on walking for what felt like an hour when suddenly, in the deadly quiet night, I stepped on something that crackled. I took my foot off it and stepped down again - it sounded like ice that was cracking. Unsure about what to do next, I stepped down yet again and took a few steps forward. More crackling, even though I had frozen. Suddenly the atmosphere changed; now it was freezing cold, as though someone had just been killed. Now I was terrified. As the noise got louder and louder, now echoing through the endless night, my feet started to get lower and lower. Before I could help myself, I was falling through the black.

Soon, the night turned to day, and the sun shone brightly against the blue sky. I was in a new world. Getting up, in a happy mood, I glanced around to find that I was in the middle of a forest. There was a vague pathway leading one way and another opposite. Being the undecisive girl I was, I pondered for a moment, then chose to go down the middle.

The End

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