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 Ashton slowly got up from her seizure.  She was old enough to be ashamed so she grunted and slowly went back to her coloring. But Ashton wasn't just ashamed she was angry but she didn,t know why she was angry. She didn,t know that she was angry at herself, angry about being so vulnerable again. Ashton started coloring hard and fast on that paper. She bashed her markers flat.  Ashton's father Mark winced as he watched  Cade ,Maria and lily just stare at her. Then they watched Mark. But all he did was move them aside.

" Honey, why don't we go and put some pennies in that fountain over there" Maria said as she dragged Lily with her.

Lily watched in horror as Ashton shredded her paper and tossed it around. Lily had never done anything like that but she had seen her brothers get angry like that but she couldn't girl weren't suppose to, even though her mommy did.

Mark cleared his throat and captured Cades attention.

" She has over a hundred seizures a day. She barely functions. I hate seeing her like this, so angry at everyone and everything because she can't just be like everyone else." Mark's voice wavered

Cade just nodded. He didn,t know what to say. Perhaps there was nothing to say.

" We are taking her to sick kids, looking into getting that part of her brain removed. I know, I know it sounds drastic and dangerous but the doctors have assured us that the procedure is completely safe. But...But...there going to have to take the speech part of her brain too. She's going to have to relearn to speak and have speech problems all of her life. But it will be worth it right?"

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Phoenix.Wolf Come one, Come all! Here, you will create a character and throw it into the hub-bub of airport life. Your character will then mingle with the others.

Rules:
1. Have fun, don't be afraid to post!
2. Please respect others, we are all equal
3. Don't decide to kill off everbody. Its NOT funny.

The story does not have to be in chronological order but please don't make things too confusing.

Also characters can be anything, ghosts, vampires, monsters, aliens in disguise, murderers. So go nuts thats what its here for!

Characters
Alex - A vampire previously on the bus he left when he accidently created a half-vampire. (Burnthestars)

Konrad - A very old Vampire elder who dishonoured Isabella's family when he turned her years ago. (MPCB94)

Isabella VI - A hunter, after her ancestor Isabella was turned into a Vampire and her family was shamed she vowed to kill Konrad.(MPCB94)

Isabella - A Vampire and previous lover of Konrad. She was brought to the airport by the mother of night's summoning. (MPCB94)

Pandora - A leopard skin-walker that can't remember her past and when she transforms she is constantly bound in silver chains. (Phoenix.Wolf)

Silvas - Pandora's capturer. Appeared in the airport after Konrad called forth vampires for help. He seems to want to cause nothing but trouble. (Phoenix.Wolf)

Cade - A male human?(Estella)

Ms. Maria Thompson - is an unmarried female human, who was born into a wealthy upper class family, which lost it's wealth when Maria was a young girl and a mysterious 'evil man' ruined her father. She has always thought about that man, but never had the guts to ever find out anything about him...
Her mother died when Maria was in her teens. And since then she has been slowly using up what remains of her money in order to try and marry a wealthy man (preferably Royalty) to become rich again.
She finds that she is starting to fall for Cade...
Sumnerzangel)

Sunshine - An Alien in disguise who's purpose is not known yet.(Moonwalker)

Roxy - A woman scorned by Jet, she can see into the future and does not yet know how to control her visions. (Bluejay)

Characters No longer here

Jet - A demon with a knack for toruble. He has now been exorcised and returned to the dark plain and the possession of Lucifer. (Burnthestars)

So have fun, and don't worry. ^.^

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