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Jackie: Still feeling sickly

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"Do you have a small cup of water, Olivia?" I asked. I coughed really hard, then she gave me a bottle with a worried look on her face. I pulled out of my bag another bottle with tablets inside. I took  them and handed the bottle back to Olivia.

"Hunter?" I asked, "Did you really carry me?" He grunted, as if I wasn't under-weight.

I squirmed a little.. I think I was getting restless. That's a first, I thought to myself, and smiled.

Then coughed again. My coughings were getting harder and more hurtful where we are. I'm hoping that as soon as  we get out of the mist and dust, I'll feel better.

This time, after my coughing settled, Hunter shushed, and we all listened.

Footsteps where coming nearer and nearer.

The End

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SageMoonblood Please comment if you want to claim a character. It will make it easier on me and anyone else who wants to join.

And tell me what your characters appearance is. The Info about their background or what-not is optional.

Rules:
1- No Vulgar language
2- No mature content
3- Be nice to everyone
4- HAVE FUN

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Aimili - 16
Author: SageMoonblood
Appearance: Black hair that goes below her ears with bright blue eyes. She wears a black tunic with black leggings and dark boots with a dagger concealed in her left one. Short for her age.
Personality: She is quiet and avoides huge crowds but is far from shy. She has an anger problem and tends to make rash desicions. Has trouble trusting people.
Info: Has been betrayed by most people she's let in. The only person who she really trusts is her friend, Dalziel.
Crystal Power/Color: Can enhance or weaken other people and their powers but she has to be able to touch them. Can block people from entering her mind. She can shoot energy blasts but it all depends on how much energy she has./Violet

Dalziel - 17
Author: Elorithryn
Appearance: Short Blond hair, with bangs that are forever getting in his way. brown eyes so dark they are almost black. He's built like a bean pole (tall and thin) and is stronger than he looks. His prefered garb is a long sleeve white shirt under a black tunic, with black leggins and dark boots. He often likes wearing a dark green cloak, because it can hide his hair which tends to reflect light. It also conceals the bow and quiver he tends to carry.
Personality: He is a calm, thoughtful boy. He has a lot of patience and is very friendly. Hates death. Doesn't like killing.
Crystal Power/Color: Can create a force field. Has the ability to heal himself and others. Can take over the minds of people near him./ Blue

Callan - 18
Author: HeyJude
Appearance: He's got curling red hair that's always messy, and clear grey eyes that are so guarded most people think he's incapable of feelings. He's of medium build, and got the lean body of an athlete. Is also very fleet-footed. His preferred garments include a black tunic, black leggings and a good pair of leather boots. He also likes to wear a long black cloak with a hood to conceal his bright red hair, and is never seen without his sword at his belt. Also has an assortment of daggers hidden in various places on his body.
Personality: He likes to be and do things alone. Prideful. Hates asking people for help. Thinks people expect too much from him.
Crystal Power/Color: Can make inadiment objects come to life. Can fly and control fire./ Red


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Hunter - 18
Author: ShyahByah
Appearance:Short brown hair. Brown eyes that turn yellow when he teleports. Mostly wears rugby shirts or his uncle's leather jacket, jeans, Doc Martins. Athletic build.
Personality: Very big headed. Thinks that just because he is the football captain that he can do whatever he wants. Loves attention.
Info: Carries a lighter although he does not smoke.
Crystal Power/Color: Teleportation. Can control the weather and read other people's minds./ Yellow

Jacklyn - 15
Author: Narissa
Appearance: Chocolate brown hair that goes down to the end of her shoulder blades and bursting green eyes. Her hair has some natural curl to it. She likes to wear shorts and short sleeve shirts.
Personality: She is very shy. Doesn't like talking to people she doesn't know. She thinks she's not good enough to make friends.
Info: Grows flowers in her basement.
Crystal Power/Color: She can control the plant life and can use photosynthesis to create engery for herself./ Green

Olivia - 17
Author: SarsaparillaMarmalade
Appearance: Constantly wears crazily colored socks and neon rainbow knit fuzzy hobo gloves. Short brown hair that's usually pulled back into a ponytail, wears shorts and short sleeved shirts. Big bright green eyes. Wears black soft-soled shoes most of the time unless playing a sport that requires hard-soled.
Personality: She is a very out-going, adventurous type of girl. She loves the outdoors and being around people. She is very sporty and loves to smile.
Crystal Power/Color: She can create and destroy any object. Can run super fast. Can lift things with her mind./Orange


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