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Just This Once - RosalynLivna

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Just this once I'll set aside my feelings. I'll give a little and take none. I'll be perfect. That will backfire on me. My heart is set on fire.

Just this once I'll be like them. I'll take a little less and make myself prettier. My stomach is an abyss, never satisfied.

Just this once I'll ease the pain. Just a little, to help me cope. That will really backfire on me. The pain will never stop, nothing will help.

Just this once and it'll all be over. Just a little act and it'll all stop. There will be no backfiring. My chaotic world will come to a halt. 

Just this once, I'll be free to be me. I'll wake up and greet the morning with a smile. Every day is a battle, every battle won is a victory for me.

Every victory means the war is closer to ending. 

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cassandramorrow Write a story that contains at least three different literary devices! It can be up to 150 words, so have fun!

Once you're finished, you know the drill: tag two friends, then leave one branch open for anyone to take the dare.

In case you're stuck, here's a list of some literary devices you could use:

◦ Simile
◦Metaphor
◦Repetition
◦Alliteration
◦Foreshadowing
◦Onomatopoeia
◦Personification
◦Motif
◦Oxymoron
◦Epithet
◦Pun
◦Hyperbole
◦Allegory
◦And many others!

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