*Allisa opens up the door to find out that she was right about him*Mature

*Allisa opens the door*

*Allisa* Hallo?

*A large bald man pushes himself in. He carries a gun in his right hand*

*Allisa absolutely terrified* Oh my God! You’re a psychotic killer!!

*Large man slams the door behinds him. He grins menacingly to reveal a set of black and green teeth. He does not speak. He advances in front. Allisa walks one step back for every step front he takes.*

*Allisa completely petrified* Oh my God; you’re a psychotic murderer who does not brush his teeth!!*

*Large man’s face turns sour. He grabs Allisa by the collar.*

*Large man in a surprisingly hurt sounding voice* I don’t have dental insurance!!

*Allisa stammers* I....I’m s....s....sorry, please ...don’t r...r...rape me!”

 *Man does not speak, just pushes Allisa back against the wall. Allisa stumbles. Alisa gets to her feet wobbling, and runs into the hall.*

*Man is breathing heavily as he trudges after her. Mans breathing becomes very hard.*

*Man growls*I kill you!!

*Allisa yells* Help!!

*Mans breath grows heavier. Suddenly he clamps onto his chest*

*Man says slightly panicked*Crap, I left my inhaler at my mother’s house!!

*Allisa looks at the crumpling man, who is now wheezing heavily.* Oh my God! You’re a psychotic killer rapist with no hair, bad teeth, and asthma!!

*Man on his knees gets angry, and throws a nearby vase at Allisa. Allisa dodges. The vase breaks into a million pieces.*

*Allisa now very upset,* That was very expensive!!

*Man lunges forward in a final attempt to hurt Allisa. Allisa is seething with rage. She instinctively picks up a chair, and bangs the man on the head with it.*

*Allisa yells in triumph* Strength of a woman!!

*The man is not moving. Allisa is very afraid.*

*Allisa absolutely shocked*Oh my God! Did I just kill the murdering rapist with no hair, bad teeth and asthma?!!?

 

 

 

 

 

The End

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