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I had soon followed Elizabeth and her mysterious male acquaintance to a small town, where they seemed to believe themselves safe. I then began considering the tricky business of catching and killing the murderers.

Simply ending their lives with the pull of a trigger or the launching of an arrow wasn't enough. They had to suffer. So, I developed a complicated plot.

I would wait outside the town, avoiding being seen, for a time, letting the fear overtake them as the news that I knew what they had done sank in. Then, I would begin making discrete appearances at the outskirts of town to other citizens of this place. The next phase of my plan involved quietly approaching their home in the night, and allowing myself to be seen in the area, but only for a few moments before I disappeared. It would be an entertaining game of cat and mouse between us. Eventually, when I got bored, I would approach them in the night and hunt them down and kill them like animals.

I wouldn't simply kill them, though - that would be too easy. I would give them a chance to run, to play the game, then jump on them one at a time and cut their throats.

I wasn't proud of myself; in fact, half the time, I couldn't tell myself from the new, darker side that wanted nothing but blood. I couldn't control this other side of me - and it was he who developed this plan and brought it to me. I chose to put it into motion, with some persuasion from him. He kept my eyes on the truth. He made sure I kept stock of the situation, reminding me who was responsible every waking moment, and even in my dreams he was there, whispering into my ear.

Perhaps they would have called me insane. Perhaps they would have been right. But no one would doubt, I knew, that along with my new accomplice, I was justified.

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CrystalRose Closed between CrystalRose, TheGirlInTheCupboard and Ty694

The Past - Two lovers wish to be together but one is married. The only way for them to be is for the husband to die.
The Present - Three teens are cursed by the Karma of their past lives. Will they sort it out before its too late

Posting Order

CrystalRose - Present
TheGirlInTheCupboard - Past
Ty694 - Present
CrystalRose - Past
TheGirlInTheCupboard - Present
Ty694 - Past

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CrystalRose

Past
Name: Elizabeth Johnson
Age: 19
Personality: She is a kind women at heart but if she doesnt like something she will let it show. She is loved by most and thought of as a little dumb even though she is not. She does not like her life and is often sad.
Appearance: Long wavy chestnut hair usually tied back with a ribbon. Gentle features and large open grey eyes. She has fair skin and is considered petite. She has little freckle on her cheeks beneath her eyes and on her nose. Considered very beautiful.

Present
Name: Katie Ryans
Age: 16
Personality: She is quite and very emotional. She has been bullied all her life so its not odd to find her crying. She is very shy and always seems to whisper when she speaks. She is very intelligent and spends nearly all her time buried in a new book.
Appearance: Short cut auburn hair to just below her jaw its always fizzled and messy but still straight. She has squared shaped glasses that are brown rimmed. She has bright green eyes and very gentle delicate features. She's petite and thin. She's pretty but forgettable.

TheGirlInTheCupboard

Past
Name: Jonathan Wakefield.
Age: 21
Personality: Jonathan is passionate, but easy-going. He finds luck and opportunity come to him without him doing much. He is confident but not too full of himself. He is witty and likeable. He has inherited a great wealth from his uncle and hasn't had to work a day in his life.
Appearance: Jonathan is tall and stocky, with dark hair and green-grey eyes. He is attractive and dresses well, but doesn't put too much effort into his appearance.

Present
Name: Darryl Jones.
Age: 17.
Personality: Darryl is also easy-going, funny, and people like him. He is also an underachiever and chooses to drop out of school at 17.
Appearance: Darryl too has dark hair, which he styles elaborately. He is thin, of average height. He is not unattractive, but there is nothing distinctive about his looks.

Ty694

Past
Name: William Johnson
Age: 20
Personality: William is funny, but can have a darker sense of humor. He sometimes doesn't know when to back down and that can get him into trouble. He occasionally shows a temper, but is usually calm and collected.
Appearance: William has short black hair and is average height for his age. He is not skinny, but he doesn't have a lot of bulk, either. His eyes are brown.

Present
Name: Tristan Ford
Age: 16
Personality: Tristan can be hot-tempered and impulsive. He is also funny when he wants to be, but can turn terrifying in seconds. He hates going to school and being told what to do, and spends as little time at home as possible.
Appearance: Tristan has medium-length black hair and blue eyes. He is tall and has a lot of muscle. He is fairly attractive, but still not overly popular.

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