I've Seen an Empty Box
I've seen an empty box
just sitting there
just being
empty
full
of things I don't understand
things I don't see
memories of days long by
thoughts and feelings
of someone I never knew
whose box it was
I will never know
but does it really matter?
they're in there
I can feel them
it's just an empty box
but so much more
The End
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Please start your chapter with "I've seen" and then whatever you are describing.Write a few, or more, paragraphs about your topic. Some things you could include:
- If your topic is masculine or feminine.
- What it looks like, of course!
- It's clothing, or items it is carrying.
- Who, what, where, when, and even why it is.
- It's connection to humans.
And please try and keep with the format and everything.
The branches you put in, if possible, should be very clear. Don't say something like "I've Seen A Flower". What type of flower? A lily, a rose, yellow, red? Be descriptive!
Now go, go, go!
Branches so far: (Those without authors are ones not yet written)
I've seen a mountain- GoldenLilac
I've seen a rain cloud- WindxWater
I've seen a red wolf- mike_itong
I've seen a weeping willow- GoldenLilac
I've seen the crescent moon- GoldenLilac
I've seen a salmon in the river- GoldenLilac
I've seen an empty box- Westrina
I've seen a fern uncurl
I've seen the sunrise
I've seen a galloping horse
I've seen a small bird take flight
I've seen an eagle in the sky.
I've seen a picture frame
I've seen the howling wind
I've seen a picker's cabin
I've seen a ptarmigan
I've seen a babbling brook
I've seen a lightning bolt
I've seen the starry sky
I've seen an Arctic bear
I've seen a ship set sail
I've seen a sunbeam
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was posted on Jul 14, 2010 by
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Brainstorming, Descriptive Writing
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