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I've seen the mountains, with the peaks of snow and arrayed in green fir trees.

Like a pale woman, her face as white as snow, and a green garment covering her. It's layers make her regal, a figure worthy to note. Plump and jolly, yet beautiful all the same. The cities and towns, like playhouses, arrayed at her feet, which are covered by the thick mantle of evergreen.

She, alone, holds the sky above her head, she's a queen, no less. And at eve, the colourful glow outlines her shape, giving her different lights, different shades. And with each change, she is a different queen.

The red glow is fire, a queen of warm fire stands at the horizon. The yellow glow is benevolence, a queen of benevolence sees over, gently. The pink glow is beauty, a queen of beauty who shines brightly. The orange glow is thought, a wise queen of thinking watches the humans. The purple glow is family, a kind queen of love who gathers us to her heart.

Now let us be kind to the pale-faced woman who stands as a mountain, let us love her too, for she is fire, benevolence, beauty, thought, and family, she is a queen arrayed in green firs, and a solid keeper of humanity.

She is a mountain, yet more.

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GoldenLilac Please start your chapter with "I've seen" and then whatever you are describing.

Write a few, or more, paragraphs about your topic. Some things you could include:
- If your topic is masculine or feminine.
- What it looks like, of course!
- It's clothing, or items it is carrying.
- Who, what, where, when, and even why it is.
- It's connection to humans.

And please try and keep with the format and everything.

The branches you put in, if possible, should be very clear. Don't say something like "I've Seen A Flower". What type of flower? A lily, a rose, yellow, red? Be descriptive!

Now go, go, go!

Branches so far: (Those without authors are ones not yet written)

I've seen a mountain- GoldenLilac
I've seen a rain cloud- WindxWater
I've seen a red wolf- mike_itong
I've seen a weeping willow- GoldenLilac
I've seen the crescent moon- GoldenLilac
I've seen a salmon in the river- GoldenLilac
I've seen an empty box- Westrina
I've seen a fern uncurl
I've seen the sunrise
I've seen a galloping horse
I've seen a small bird take flight
I've seen an eagle in the sky.
I've seen a picture frame
I've seen the howling wind
I've seen a picker's cabin
I've seen a ptarmigan
I've seen a babbling brook
I've seen a lightning bolt
I've seen the starry sky
I've seen an Arctic bear
I've seen a ship set sail
I've seen a sunbeam

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