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            Chaos unfolds like the petals of a flower. It's beautiful, it's natural, yet most people don't see its fragile beauty. They just don't see it at all. They're too busy panicking.

            The emotions of the untainted are so easily tampered with. Just a small change throws off the balance of everything, changing things in any way I want to. My victims are like marionettes; attached to the ends of me ropes, moving when I tell them, totally in my control.

            And it was so easy. The planting of a faux arrow in the chest of a woman or setting fire to the houses or the people would break the uneasy peace between the clans once again. Accusations would be made, defensive actions would take place, and war would break out.

            Beautiful pandemonium.

            With the crystal in my possession, nothing will stop me from taking over these lands that for so long should have been mine. And once I figure out how the sacred crystal is composed, there will be nothing holding me back from either converting it, or making a new, darker one.

            There won't be one person who won't be under my influence. I'll be in total control.

            I am the way I am for simple reasons. No love bestowed on me means that I have nothing tying me down. I am not capable love, so therefore I tie myself down to nothing. And no identity means that no one can blame me for anything.

            No one knows I even exist. They know not of what I am capable of. They don't know that I have no weakness, that I cannot be beaten. But they soon will. Very soon.

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aphrodite369 This is like the main idea of the story. In other words the plot:

An artifact that keeps peace within the clans is stolen. Now, the leaders of the seperate clans have to gather and let their differences aside to get it back so they could stop the civil war that has risen and will lead to their extinction. The only way to defeat the thief is by combining their abilities together and most importantly, to their limit. But many complications will be brought up since the artifact is no longer there.

There are five clans in the story and one person from each clan will take the leadership for their clan to return the artifact. Those people will be two girls and three boys.

The girls are:

Name: Saphaia
Age: 15
Description: Long striaght silver hair up to her waist with redish-brown eyes. Keeps
personal information to herself and doesn't trust anyone from the other
clans -- she will gradually get to doing that. She wants to get things
over and done with (that means the mission to retreve the artifact).
Ability: Pulls out daggers or swords made from her hair.
Clan: Casting clan
Author: Aphrodite369

Name: Sionan
Age: 15
Description: Slient, has a fierce look especially with her enchanting amber green
eyes and only thinks about the mission compared to the others. She
is very abrupt when the others talk to her with superiority. She has
dark black hair, medium long (ends at the middle of her back) which
is slightly wavy.
Ability: (From the eyes) Silent death; it makes the person she is concentrating on
to feel excruciating pain, but has many flaws; she hasn't perfected it yet.
Clan: Peripheral clan
Author: Yuuki

The boys are:

Name: Bass
Age: 15
Description: Shiny short-cropped, linen-cut (layers) dark brunette hair chestnut
brown eyes. Very interested in fighting the enemy to show off his new
skills and to perfect it as he goes through the mission.
Ability: Fencing (One slice can kill everyone in sight but he hasn't managed that
much; he's succeeded to kill 30 people with every swift of his sword). He can weave fire every time he strikes with his sword.
Clan: Swordplay clan
Author: Book Crawler

Name: Zeagle
Age: 15
Description: Short-cropped blond hair with sky blue eyes and has hard facial
characteristics, mainly from his past (I'll let the author decided what it
would be like just make sure you tell me).
Ability: Martial arts with sorcery (spellwork and the facial characteristics is a long scar cutting through his blind eye and along his nose).
Clan: Jujitsu clan
Author: EmeraldBull

Name: Zath
Age: 15
Description: Dark brown eyes with long hair, tide up very low with a few strands of
his hair falling in front of his face. Believes that working together would
be a great idea but when he confronts them, anger gets the better of
him and ends up into a fight. Somewhere, more deeper into the story
he will do it because he doesn't have any other alternative.
Ability: Archery; the bow can go through any surface and can destroy anything it
slices though.
Clan: Archery clan
Author: Euphrates

The villain is:

Name: Vasilim
Age: Unknown, but looks like he is close to his 20's or 30's
Description: He comes from a sixth clan that none of the five clans know about. He was the apprentice of the crystal maker (the crystal is the artifact which is made out of the web of a sacred spider) and wants to unravel the secrets that the crystal holds to make one for himself (to make a dark one) so he can obliviate the other clans and make his the only one remaining.
Ability: Crystal maker (an amateur)
Clan: Unknown
Author: Spiderwebz

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