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The wind's soothing breeze passed by like a weightless feather lightly touching the flesh of bare skin. Everyone -- from human to insect -- stayed inside in the company of their own home to prepare themselves for the following day.

Every house was illuminated with colours of red and yellow, keeping the atmosphere warm, all except for one.

In the center of the inhabited area was a mountain. Its name was Lazaroth; a mountain that serarates all five clans to maintain peace and serenity within its presence. However, when it was time to combine their powers together, it required for them to trust each other. 

Although it was a simple demand, the clans could not come to an agreement and so a temple was built at the peak of Mount Lazaroth, placing a powerful crystal ball made out of the web of the sacred spider to acquire companionship and loyalty to the people.

Later that night, though, when the last of the bright houses went dark, someone entered the temple with ease to get back what was rightfully his -- or so he thought. Knowing every trap that was set in the temple, the person did not make a sound. It took him only ten minutes to cross those obstacles and retreve what was lying at the deepest part of the temple.

"Gotcha." The person said greedly, finishing his sentence with a wicked laugh and disappeared into the darkness.

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aphrodite369 This is like the main idea of the story. In other words the plot:

An artifact that keeps peace within the clans is stolen. Now, the leaders of the seperate clans have to gather and let their differences aside to get it back so they could stop the civil war that has risen and will lead to their extinction. The only way to defeat the thief is by combining their abilities together and most importantly, to their limit. But many complications will be brought up since the artifact is no longer there.

There are five clans in the story and one person from each clan will take the leadership for their clan to return the artifact. Those people will be two girls and three boys.

The girls are:

Name: Saphaia
Age: 15
Description: Long striaght silver hair up to her waist with redish-brown eyes. Keeps
personal information to herself and doesn't trust anyone from the other
clans -- she will gradually get to doing that. She wants to get things
over and done with (that means the mission to retreve the artifact).
Ability: Pulls out daggers or swords made from her hair.
Clan: Casting clan
Author: Aphrodite369

Name: Sionan
Age: 15
Description: Slient, has a fierce look especially with her enchanting amber green
eyes and only thinks about the mission compared to the others. She
is very abrupt when the others talk to her with superiority. She has
dark black hair, medium long (ends at the middle of her back) which
is slightly wavy.
Ability: (From the eyes) Silent death; it makes the person she is concentrating on
to feel excruciating pain, but has many flaws; she hasn't perfected it yet.
Clan: Peripheral clan
Author: Yuuki

The boys are:

Name: Bass
Age: 15
Description: Shiny short-cropped, linen-cut (layers) dark brunette hair chestnut
brown eyes. Very interested in fighting the enemy to show off his new
skills and to perfect it as he goes through the mission.
Ability: Fencing (One slice can kill everyone in sight but he hasn't managed that
much; he's succeeded to kill 30 people with every swift of his sword). He can weave fire every time he strikes with his sword.
Clan: Swordplay clan
Author: Book Crawler

Name: Zeagle
Age: 15
Description: Short-cropped blond hair with sky blue eyes and has hard facial
characteristics, mainly from his past (I'll let the author decided what it
would be like just make sure you tell me).
Ability: Martial arts with sorcery (spellwork and the facial characteristics is a long scar cutting through his blind eye and along his nose).
Clan: Jujitsu clan
Author: EmeraldBull

Name: Zath
Age: 15
Description: Dark brown eyes with long hair, tide up very low with a few strands of
his hair falling in front of his face. Believes that working together would
be a great idea but when he confronts them, anger gets the better of
him and ends up into a fight. Somewhere, more deeper into the story
he will do it because he doesn't have any other alternative.
Ability: Archery; the bow can go through any surface and can destroy anything it
slices though.
Clan: Archery clan
Author: Euphrates

The villain is:

Name: Vasilim
Age: Unknown, but looks like he is close to his 20's or 30's
Description: He comes from a sixth clan that none of the five clans know about. He was the apprentice of the crystal maker (the crystal is the artifact which is made out of the web of a sacred spider) and wants to unravel the secrets that the crystal holds to make one for himself (to make a dark one) so he can obliviate the other clans and make his the only one remaining.
Ability: Crystal maker (an amateur)
Clan: Unknown
Author: Spiderwebz

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