In Support of Vervell
INTRODUCTION The chapters that follow are deleted scenes from my Vervellian Phoenix Trilogy, which I also sometimes call The Phoenixes of Vervell. Either way what you are reading are the thoughts, feelings and actions of the characters from Sarah's Phoenix and Phoenix Rising and Phoenix Triumphant. These postings are essentially the second draft, transcribed from the notebook to the computer. I am not in any way trying to edit these before I post, neither for grammar nor continuity for the story as posted. These postings are essentially an exercise in character development. I've written them because I've needed insight on why certain characters are the way they are. Or what goes on when Sarah is not around to then figure out how people react to her. Now that I have bored you to tears (for I certainly hope not to death) I shall wrap this introduction and actually post something. I just want to warn you again: ~ This is a showcase of how I work, not a competed and edited novel. For that I ask you to visit to check out the stories inked to over there in the Author’s Guidance. Thank you, :} Eorithryn
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Since Spook so dearly requested to see some of the Cut scenes from my Vervellean Phoenix Trilogy I dedicate this story to her. The thing to remember is - this is like a product of NaNo (in fact the cuts form PT are slightly edited products of NaNo) - these scenes came from the sit down and just get it onto paper method of writing. They've gone through very little editing; only what I deemed necessary for the transcription from a notebook to the computer. The characters have developed along the way, some of them even changing, as I've explored their relationships with one another. Additionally where the story is going now and where it was going in the beginning has also evolved.
But never mind that - here is a peek, current or not, at some of the other characters that Sarah interacts with on her journey through Vervell and Azer. Her story, the real story can be found:
Book 1, Sarah's Phoenix is posted at: http://www.protagonize.com/story/sarahs-phoenix
Book 2, Phoenix Rising is posted at: http://www.protagonize.com/story/phoenix-rising
Book 3, Phoenix Triumphant is posted at: http://www.protagonize.com/story/phoenix-triumphant-
:} Elorithryn
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