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I awoke with a start the next morning. The strange figures from the hallway had haunted me throughtout the dream world and a specific part of my dream had made me sit bolt upright.

"What's wrong..?" Kit said drowsily. I realised that I was panting and shaking and I quickly gulped and readied myself.

"Nothing, sorry, I just.. a bad dream. I had a bad dream." I said finally, between deep breaths. "Sorry I woke you up." I glanced around the room. I had followed the lynx and the new girl out of the room and after eating we had decided to go to a different room to sleep in. I could see her chest rising and falling and hear the deep breaths that were issuing from her and decided that she was asleep.

I muttered another apology to Kit before clambering out of the bed I had slept in. I walked along the corridor of the hotel, aware that Kit was following me. "Go back to bed Kit," I whispered, "I don't wanna wake the others."

A voice from one of the rooms on the hallway told me that there was no need for quiet, the others were awake already. I stood outside the door, listening in on a conversation that was being had inside.

"Shall we go get some breakfast?" said a female voice which I immediatley recognised to be that of Sally; the girl with the dragonfly.

A quiet voice murmured back, "Okay, shall we wake the others?" I guessed this one to be Adelaide. I quickly realised that if I were to stay here I would be noticed, and this would arouse the suspicions of the group.

As I was thinking of a place to hide, the door flung open and Adelaide walked out. I opened my mouth to give an excuse as to why I was stood outside their door but as Sally left the room, quietly closing the large door behind her, it became apparent that they hadn't noticed me.

"Uhh... Hey guys," I said, walking fast to catch up with them.

"Who's there?" Sally said, spinning around and surveying the corridor. As she scanned the hallway it became apparent that she could not see me.

"Uhh... It's me, Fia?" I said, confused. She seemed to look straight through me before she spoke again.

"Where are you? I can't see you..?" she spoke uncertainly. I felt uncomfortable and confused. I wondered to myself about whether I had actually woken up or if I was still dreaming.

I felt a sudden rush of warmth spreading through my body and I looked up at Sally. Her expression showed a mixture of confusion and shock and she opened her mouth to speak, yet no words came out, she just stood there, gawping at me. I looked over at Adelaide who was wearing a similar expression.

"What are you looking at me like that for?" I uttered, slightly hurt and confused. "What did I do?"

"You... You just... Appeared... You... How did you do that?!" Sally spluttered, looking at me with awe.

"What?! I didn't do anything! I was here all along, what are you talking about!?" Kit slinked around the corner and stood between me and them.

"Fia, you possess the rare ability to become invisible. Now, lets go eat," he said, grinning a slightly cheeky grin.

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Name: Luna
Age: 17
Animal Guardian: Rabbit(Kanin)
Personality: Easily scared yet moves through that fear. Keeps her wits and search for hidden meanings in sentences or signs. Quick thinker, normally contradicts herself. A push over and normally gets embarrassed easily, quiet and soft. Not self asserting.
Appearance: Average height, short white hair that goes down to just below her chin. Amazing blue eyes, a cute appearance in a sense. Agile and fast, always aware of danger yet can stay still for a long time and make no noise.
Powers: Can cause imense fear, can create limited barriers. Can do some healing but is quite draining.
Extra Info: Very humble, and takes insults badly, leading to her doubting herself and picking at all she does wrong. Her own worst enemy. Has no family, lives on her own or with a flat partner who doesn't stay long. Has been trained in the use of a bow.
Author: Almach

Name: Caleb
Age: 17
Animal Guardian: Wolf (Waya)
Personality: Fiercely loyal, intense, straightforward, peaceful, loving, caring, compassionate, forgiving, those who he doesn't know can't get to him, but those that are closer can easily hurt his feelings or build up his confidence, trusting.
Appearance: stylishly messy light dark grey (the color of a wolf's coat) hair, eyes a shade of green so light that it might as well be white. Average height, well muscled chest and incredibly well muscled arms and legs. Very agile and graceful.
Powers: can strengthen/weaken bonds between one or more people, can sense what other people are feeling and send his emotions to them (e.g. someone is sad and so he sends comforting emotions to them to cheer them up).
Extra Info: Very good at adapting. can use both swords and guns incredibly well. No family, lives by himself (he never knew his family).
Author: Skooch

Name: Adelaide
Age: 14, almost 15
Animal Guardian: Deer(Ayala)
Personality: Quite shy towards new people but is quite friendly once she gets to know them. Kind, caring, gentle. Can get hurt easily (feelings and injury). Is generally a nice person. Very quiet. Can melt into a crowd easily. Can work very well in a team.
Appearance: Just above average height. Quite slender. Light brown, waist length hair that it slightly shiny but very thin and flat. Fast and agile. Has a few freckles. Very dark brown eyes.
Powers: Can change peoples feelings (she can only feel very strong feelings from other people). Can change the noise level in a room or someone's voice (like if you were turning down some music).
Extra Info: Is scared of dogs and doesn't like weapons or loud noises. Has quite a big family, lives with eight of them (her parents, her two sisters, three brothers and her cousin).
Author:AutumnMay

Name: Sally
Age: 15
Animal Guardian: Dragonfly(Hinto)
Personality: Sally's friendly, but she's independant and prefers to work alone. She prefers to follow others rather than lead them. She is quiet but she's intelligent. She doesn't get angry, but she speaks her mind.
Appearance: Shoulder length dark blonde hair, and golden-brown eyes, she also wears glasses. She's quite small, too.
Powers: She can create illusions, and she can read people's subconsious- like she can pick up things about people from just concentrating.
Author: Quesse

Name: Terry Slick
Age: 21
Animal Guardian: Porcupine (Real name: Prick, sub name: Stick)
Personality: A shy guy who has some confidence but is mostly misunderstood. He's bright, but most people refuse to recognize it. Never went to college and instead went to a technician school but then dropped out. Due to this he mostly keeps to himself but he does go out and public places and sometimes meets interesting people. They either are distrustful, tourists, or have to move and therefore he does not keep friends for long. He seems harmless but does keep fit doing illegal street fighting, urban exploration and parkour. He works at a hobby shop and enjoys working there. His family thinks he is a failure and so they send him money, He is good in about every school subject, and quite skeptic. He is a slight skeptic and believes in conspiracies. One day, he wants prove his worth by shutting one down.
Appearance: Medium length, Gray hair with some blue streaks that curves downward, burning red eyes, he wears a black, blue and red light sports jacket with some regular jeans. On his back is a small sports bag. He is slim but fit yet not too buff or strong. He wears red and gray running shoes.
Powers: Friction, Spike Shift
Extra Info:
Author:TempestFlux

Name: Fiametta (prefers to be called Fia)
Age: 16
Animal Guardian: Fox (Kit)
Personality: Often in trouble, however also does bad things and gets away with it. Very protective of her little sister, Lucita (5 years old). Often prefers to slink into the shadows than join in with arguments or fights, unless it is to do with Lucita or her best friend, Maxine.
Appearance: Short with medium/short browny-blonde hair. Brown eyes, likes to wear simple clothes, like jeans, in order to blend in with the crowd.
Powers: Can become invisible at own will. Also has ultra-sensitive hearing and can see well in the dark.
Author: Mollie1994

Name: Evalina (Eva or Lin)
Age: 18
Animal Guardian: Lynx (Raylene)
Personality: Closed-off, very dry humoured, is hard to make friends with, difficult, generally quiet, prefers to be alone, rarely shows emotion/difficult to read, despite cold exterior is actually a nice person underneath - it's just hard to realise that.
Appearance: Very striking. Layered, black hair that reaches just past her hips, grey eyes, tall and curvascious. Has a cynical look in her eyes and a skeptical set to her mouth. Looks in need of sleep and sun. Graceful/fluid.
Powers: Can read minds but they have to be within a certain distance. She also has flashes of the future but can't control it.
Extra Info: Hates her powers because they drive her insane and make it difficult being physically close to people. She's a great fighter (self-defence) and knows how to use a shotgun. Moves swiftly and very quickly. Has no friends and no family, other than a distant cousin.
Author: LilHill

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