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There was a massive crash, just down the street from the university. It was quiet in the classroom when it happened, so that everyone jumped at the sudden, unexpected noise. Julian leaned out the window, seeing the tangle of horses, chariots and a strange blue box made of wood. A student a few years ahead of Julian sometimes doodled a similar box on his worksheets, Julian had once asked him about it, but he didnt seem to be able to explain much. He'd said it was the house of a god, who had saved his family from the explosive force of Mt. Vesuvius. Julian jumped back from the window and ran outside to investigate the crash.

"What happened?" He asked a charioteer disentangling himself from the wreckage.

"Dunno." The man grunted. "This box appeared out of nowhere." He hit the thing in the side, and suddenly, the doors fell open and two people climbed out. They were dressed in strange clothes, thick shoes and many layers in dark colors. Trousers and tunics, working clothes. Julian scrambled over the wreckage to get a better look at them, they were hard to describe.

"When in Rome." The woman began, surveying the scene like she owned the city. The man grinned and Julian was instantly put at ease, it was a smile he could trust. But then, across the Plaza, he felt eyes staring at him, and turned. The prophet-god was there, staring at the pair, frowning darkly. They did not belong here, that was obvious, but the way that man looked at the pair, it was like they weren't even allowed to be here.

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jamm Closed collab between jamm, MichaelaJakeReynolds, VictoriaGlass, ImprintedHeart and JSimmons

The 11th Doctor
Bio: The Doctor is an ancient Timelord from the planet Gallifrey, who travels in his TARDIS throughout all time and space with his many companions. Now in his eleventh incarnation, he is a quick-tempered yet compassionate man whose youthful appearance is at odds with his more discerning and world-weary temperament.
jamm

Name: Hannah Kensington
Age: 19 years old
Race: Human
Occupation: History & Drama student, part-time waitress
Appearance: Hannah is of an average height and build with topas blue eyes, with moss green flecks, and strawberry blonde, mid length hair. Her dress sense is quite girly but with a quirky, indie edge.
Extra: Hannah received straight A's throughout school and college and hopes to become a Actress, specialising in period drama. She is the middle child, with one older brother and one younger sister, and lives at home with her Mum. Her Dad died when she was very young. Hannah is open minded but isn't afraid to let her opinions known. She can be quite argumentative but is the most loyal and trustworthy person you will ever know. She loves to travel and her favourite colour is Blue.
MichaelaJakeReynolds


Angie Meyers
Age: 14
Race: Human
Occupation: None as such, although she aspires to become an artist one day and spends her time drawing.
Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, green eyes. Freckles - lots of them. Chunky black glasses.
Extra: Angie is American. Her parents are divorced; she lives with her abusive father in the state of Michigan. Her father not only abuses her, but does not allow her to have friends and threatens her if she makes any at school. Reclusive and lonely, Angie sees no hope for her future.
VictoriaGlass

Name Erin Watson
Age 18 years old
Race Human
Occupation English Language and Psychology student, Shop Assistant at the weekends
Appearance Erin is quite tall with ash blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. She is very up today with fashion and and very pretty. She can use her looks to her advantage when she wants to.
Personality Erin is quite a curious young lady, she aspires to be a journalist, meaning that she is very interested when it comes to investigating into things.
Extra Erin is a brightspark and is the top of her classes in college and aspires to attend J school after college. Erin can be quite stuborn and arguementative when she wants to be but would do anything to help her friends out, even if that means putting herself in danger to help them.
Erin has a tendancy to bottle up her emotions and not let off that anything is bugging her. She always has a smile on her face even if sometimes the smile doesnt reach her eyes.
Erin lives at home with her parents and her younger brother Simon, who is 14.
Erin has met the doctor on and off throughout her life since the age of 8 years old so she knows him quite well and when she turned 18 she started travelling with him. Was the first of the companions to join the doctor.
ImprintedHeart

Name Julian
Age 19
Race Human
Occupation Scholar
Appearance Dark hair, tan, dresses in ordinary
Personality quiet, but curious about the world, he spends his time reading the works of the philosophers of greece.
Extra Julian has always dreamed of traveling the world. Rome is the largest empire of the known world, but he hasnt seen most of it, having been in school most of his life.
JSimmons

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