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Maloria lay sleep soundlesly in my arms. Her eyes closed peacefully, hey cheeks flushed slightly. how i love this girl. But one day some one will try to take her away. We all know she souldnt belong with us. She is a gifted human very gifted and easily loved. she reminds me of my sister when she was human vunurable and we need to protect her fragile soul.

I just sat their starying at her in amazment ignoring everything going on around us it was like being in our own bubble where nothing could happen. after a couple of hours she began to stirr.

she looked up at me looking slighly dazed I just chuckled to my-self, she sat up and her eyes welled with tears she flung her arms around me neck and begin to cry saying please don't leave me im sorry I'm sorry. Over and over again.

I hugged her back while rocking her in my arms reashuring here I'm going no where to try and calm her down as best as I could

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D.Daniels Magic and mistery. Magic is mistery and mistery is magic. This is about the 'daylight hunters' (surprise surprise). Basically, it's in the form of the bad guys.
Three in particular actually. Guy, Maloria and Athanasios.
That's it just Guy, Maloria and Athanasios. It's in first person presents, unless you want to mix it up a wee bit and write in thrid person for another character - bare in mind that others could write for that person.
Guy and Maloria may switch teams, so beware...
DO NOT PUT THE NAME IN THE TITLE!
Thank you!



The Daylight Hunters Our characters are part of these.
- The 'baddies' in everyday retrospect.
- Have killed many Night Hunters.
- Come out at night, live in the outskirts, in seemingly abandoned buildings. The buildings are protected by special runes placed outside. The buildings have series of ways to get in...

The Night Hunters The opposion.
- The 'goodies' in everyday retrospect.
- Have killed countless daylight hunters.
- Are the opposite to the daylight hunters.
- Are equally as powerful.
- Mainly live out in the open - not vamps or whatever.


The main people: The ones you can write in first person.

Guy:
- Grey eyes, with three specks of gold in the left, four in the right, puple te shape of a cat's.
- Shortish amber hair.
- Tall
- Looks out for everyone.
- Is the strongest and best fighter.
- Confused about his feelings to Maloria. I.e. gets annoyed when she is feeling 'lovie-dovie' around him, but is jelious when she pays too much attention to other people's feelings.
- Can sheild his emotions from anyone.
- Starting to fall for Mary.
- Warming to Athanasios.

Maloria:
- Shappire eyes.
- Thick jet black hair down the the middle of her back.
- Slightly tanned.
- Is psychic, can read minds, put her vocie in other's heads.
- Secret powers that no one else knows about, not even Guy; Can project other peoples' thoughts either into a random room, or into a large group of peoples' minds; can see into the future; can manipulate peoples emotions; is empathic.
- Thinks she loves Guy, but can be destracted by other people.
- Can be manipulated by good. (shock, horror!)

Athanasios:
- Deep blue eyes which turn to red when angry or thristy.
- Dark brown hair.
- Tall
- A really nice person
- Doesn't drink that much blood, he asks before drinking, but doesn't drink that much. - When he does drink, he can see inside that person.
- Likes Maloria, who is cluless. He is protective over her too.
- Turned by Francis - his dead (really dead) best friend.
- Killed Ryan, in chapter 16.
- Warming to Guy.

Other Characters: These people can be talked about in the other three's point of view, please DO NOT write for them.

Edward.
- DEAD.
- Old leader. killed by the 'night hunters.'
- Was a Daylight hunter.

Ryan:
- A night hunter.
- tall.
- chocolatly brown hair and eyes.
- immortal.
- Killed by Athanasios in chapter 16.

Mary:
- small
- long flowing silver hair.
- pale skin
- vampire, Athanasios' little sister.
- Turned by Francis.
- Now with the daylighters (since chapter 16)

Francis:
- DEAD - killed by Ryan.
- Was best friends with Athansios.
- Was a vampire.
- Turned Athansios and his sister.

Fri:
- male
- a daylight hunter.

Ken:
- Same height as Guy.
- Powerful.
- Sandy hair.
- brown eyes.
- Night hunter.

-Dee. Feel free to participate!

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