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I wake up from a gorgeous dream about that cupid... Then find him kissing me!

“You!” I exclaim delightedly. I laugh. “I don’t even know what your name is. What do they call you, Mr Amazing?”

“Thistle. A beautiful flower, yet so poisonous.

"So enticing to its prey."

He lets his lips brush my jaw, evoking sweet pleasure from me.

"Hm," I say, relaxing completely and losing my train of thought. I kiss his lips passionately.

Thistle pulls away, startling me. He presses a finger to my lips.

"Oh, sweet maiden. I cannot tempt you so. Passion tastes so much sweeter when it is gained after an excruciating chase."

"No," I moan. "I want you now."

Thistle chuckles and skips back. "No, fair maiden. I cannot take passion that is given so easily."

I stare at him longingly. I get up and start crawling towards him on all fours.

"Please," I beg, gazing up at his face.

Thistle looks quite tempted but puts a finger to her lips again. "Please what?" he asks.

"Please bring me sweet pleasure."

Thistle leans down and kisses her sweetly pressing her down into the grass before skipping away again.

I stand up and run after him. "Thistle, please! This is torture!"

"That is the point," he whispers, pressing up against me. "By the time I finally take your passion, you will be gagging for my touch." He strokes my cheek.

 I tremble at his touch, swallowing hard. The desire is painful. I hold onto him.

"Don't," I whisper imploringly. "Don't do this to me."

Thistle strokes her cheek again. "Do you want me?"

"Yes," I breathe, my desire even evident in my tone.

Thistle smiles and kisses me, pressing me down into the soft grass. He moves our clothes slowly. I cry out in the sheer agony produced by his sloth-like actions.

Thistle chuckles. "Shh, you wait for good things."

"I don't want this to be good; I want it to be pure sin."

"Sin, sweet maiden?" Thistle smiles.

I nod. "You can't tell me you're an angel after treating me this way, Thistle. I know you want me to submit to you and your job is to produce fire in me."

Thistle smiles and suddenly, before I can comprehend, he has entered me and is killing me whilst showing me Heaven.

 

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CrystalRose Closed Collab

Thistle is a cupid. He's the male Cupid of Passion, the other being his sister.
There are many type of cupids, these are Passion, Blossoming Love, Secret Crush and Pure Love. There are two of each and they are siblings.
Thistle one day though finds himself stuck. Having charmed two powerful sorceresses he can't seem to escape from the passion he has brought forth.

Thistle Cupid
Age: Unknown
Looks: Hair that is black but seems to be sparked with starlight. His eyes are the colours of rainbows and draw in anyone who looks directly into them. He has slightly tanned skin and a roughed up look. He stands at 6"1 with an atheletic build. He has starlight wings that he can hide when he wishes. His beauty seems almost forbidden to those who gaze upon it but no one seems to be able to resist it.
Other: He can charm anyone he meets. He can make people feel, think, do, want, need and desire anything he wants them to. He is slightly arrogant but only in a charming way. He loves being a cupid and bringing forth passion within anyone. Sometimes the aura of desire and passion he gives off brings forth unwanted attraction and attention.
Author: CrystalRose

Sorceress 1
Indie Midnight
Appearance: Tall, slender, long legs. Long flowing black hair with blue streaks. Mystical midnight blue eyes.
Other: She is a sorceress inspired most by water. She falls in love with Thistle on the basis that he's a cupid, and she's a little bit obsessed with romance. He brings out a completely different side to her personality. After they've met, she's submissive and prone to passion. She becomes greatly fascinated by fire. She feels like she'd die without him, and when they kiss she feels like she's in Paradise. She'll do anything to keep him - she's so desperately attached to him.
Author: Tianna

Sorceress 2
Bliss Sunlight
Appearance: Petite and skinny. Long and glossy hair, so light that it appears white. Eyes that switch from torquoise to emerald or butterscotch depending on her emotions.
Other: Her gift is with light, honesty and all things that are pure. It is weird that she would fall for Thistle as she is enthralled by true love and not the kind of sorceress to be captured by passion.
Author: Lexiehar

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