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Seeing the girl shiver I laugh. Good. I'm still planning what to do about her. I think about asking Sarah, she could come up with a great plan, but I'm afraid she might be to loyal to the captain. So I'm on my own.

I squint at the sky, just now noticing the dark clouds. This storm looks nasty. Knowing the Captian has already prepared the crew and shop, I don't say anything. Just look at the sky.

Before I know it, I'm slammed to the ground. My hand flies to the back of my head and I feel blood. Then I faint.

When I wake up, I see John sitting by my bed. I smile up at him. He's a sweet boy. Then I notice the girl in the background and scowl. What is she doing here? I decide to ignore her and turn back to John.

"How's the ship holding up?" I ask, knowing that we must be in the middle of the storm by now.

His face looks worried as he reports, " Um, I'm not sure.."

Just then, I see a bolt of lightning.

And then everything's black.

The End
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CrystalRose Closed between CrystalRose, Cat_Monty, Shally16 and elf

Abigale Rowen cant deal be being the pet of the powerful sorcerer, Marcus. So racing away she stows away on the ship, The Storm Whisperer. Becoming discovered she sways the heart of Captain Christian Watson but that doesnt sit well with first mate, Katrin Sweeny, and will John Jackson ever gain the love of the first mate.

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Name: Abigale Rowen
Age: 22
Appearance: She has a mess of chestnut brown and auburn hair making it seem wild and untamed. It falls in curls half way down her back. She has high cheek bones and a strong jaw. She has a pixie like pair of ears and a small nose. Her eyes are wide and constantly seem innocent. They are a strange swirl of blue and green, they are quite eeirey and piercing if you look directly into them. Her skin is tanned and almost flawless except for a few freckles under her eyes. Then a scar on her left hip, ragged and clear from when she ran away from the sorcerer, Malcom, the first time.
Personality: She is quite shy and seems to avoid looking in someones eyes when she talks. She is a bit jumpy but when someone challanges her she stands firm. She knows how to stand her ground. She is kind of sweet in an innocent way. She doesnt trust men that strongly. She can be a bit cheeky when she relax's
Extra Info: She has just ran away from a very powerful sorcerer, Marcus, who wants to own her. She knows a few spells like creating a small spark and influencing the wind and waves but its not always certain to happen. This is the reason why her eyes are such an eeirey colour. This is her 2nd attempt at running away and she's so scared what Marcus will do to her when he gets her back.

Name: Captain Christian Watson
Age: 25
Appearance: Long brown hair (down to his lower back) tied up, sea-grey eyes, 6'1 with well-built body, has various scars over his body. He wears a shirt with simple trousers and a belt which he has two black and silver pistols on. He also has a captain hat which is always either on his head or tied to his waist.
Personality: Christian is a light-hearted person who is just looking for a laugh with his friends, when he does get serious he doesn't tend to say much and can at times be harsh without meaning too. He can sometimes make quick decisions without thinking everything through.
Extra Info: Christian was orphaned when he was eight when his single mother died from a severe illness. (He never knew his father nor did does he wish too) From then on he grew up on the streets (where he met Katrin) before he became a cabin-boy at thirteen and from there rose through the ranks. Now he owns his own ship - The Storm Whisperer.

Name: Katrin Sweeny (First Mate)
Age: 23
Apearence: Long dirty blonde har, straight as a board. Her eyes are a peircing jade green. Has many freckles scattered accross her face. Very sweet and innocet looking, yet very rough and tough looking at the same time. Always wears " men's" clothing.
Personality: Tom boyish. Loves fighting, but enjoys hanging out and having fun with friends.
Extra Info: She was also orphened at a young age. After running away fromher first three orphanages, she ran into Christian. He taught her how to fight and fe for herself. After he left, she mastered her skills with swords and daggers and eventually signed onto Christian's crew.

Name: John Jackson (Cabin Boy)
Age: 18
Appearance: John is small but athletic. He has short straight black hair and brown eyes. His clothes are always scruffy and dirty. As is his mature face which makes him look extremely intelagent. He always wears a white shirt and never takes it of on public as scars still show on his back. He is 5"6 in height but he doesn't really mind much.
Personality: John has a very childlike personality. Ad is very shy towards new people though he is very open and a great holster when he is around those he knows. He has a very short temper and often throws tantrums if he does not get his own way. This has led to people being a little weary of him but he is great if he is calm.
Extra Info: from a very young age John has been forced to act like an adult as he has alot of reputation to live up to. He was constantly misbehaving though and getting beat by his dad. One day he gives up and ends up running from home. After wandering the dtreets for a few months he finds Christian and his crew. He asks to join and gets accepted. He loves life aboard the crew as he feels free

The Crew
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Name: Sid
Job: Cook
Age: 31
Appearance: Round belly, mop of brown hair and beard
Personality: Likes to order people about, laughs a lot when drunk

Name: Lucas
Job: Master Gunner
Age: 37
Appearance: Beast of a man, black hair, blue eyes
Personality:stern man, never anything but serious, extremely skilled with a battleaxe

Name: Tom
Job: Gunner/Boatswain
Age: 20
Appearance: Long brown hair and green eyes
Personality: flirty and loud, a joker. - Phil's twin

Name: Phil
Job: Gunner/Boatswain
Age: 20
Appearance: Short brown hair and green eyes
Personality: Quiet, just gets the job done - Tom's twin

Name:Sarah
Job: Boatswain
Age: 19
Appearance: short, scruffy black hair and brown eyes
Personality: Shouts at Tom a lot and can hold her drink.

Name:Addea
Job: Boatswain
Age: 24
Appearance: dark-skinned with a bald head and dark eyes
Personality:was rescued from slave traders, very quiet (when he does speak it's in riddles)

Name:Derek
Job: Pilot (wheel steering)
Age: 22
Appearance: messy red hair and calculative blue eyes
Personality:friendly and clever

Name: Peter
Job:Carpenter (in charge of maintenance below deck)
Age: 36
Appearance: average height with lanky blond hair and grey eyes
Personality:A friendly, easy to talk to guy.hair

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