"Tell me you're coming to the halloween party, Heather."

"I don't know yet Carly.  I want to but you know how my mom is about this kind of stuff."

Carly sighed and rolled her eyes "Yeah I know.  I don't understand her."

"Neither do I.  She's too afraid that I'm going to get arrested or pregnant or die in an accident or something."

Carly smiled "Are those things so far from the truth?"

I smiled back.  "Not really!"

"Well you're coming one way or another alright?"

"What ever you say, Carly, what ever you say."  I smiled knowing that whether my mom said yes or not my bestfriend would find a way to get me there. 

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This story started out as a short story that I did for school. So I'm sorry if it seems to be going a little fast. Feel free to jump in at anytime and slow it down.

Characters:

Heather: Age 17 is extremly rich and almost always gets what she wants she really wants to go to a halloween party with her friends but is afraid her mother won't let her.
Author: Gnattygan

Carly: Heather's best friend who is known for throwing some really awesome parties. Really wants Heather to come to her Halloween party and is willing to do practically anything to get her there.

Mother: Goes to church every sunday and is very protective of her daughter. Doesn't like Carly very much and is afraid that she will lead her daughter into trouble.

Father: Is a CSI agent who is obssessed with his work. Used to to go with his wife to church but has become to involved with his job to go anymore. Cares a lot about his daughter and just wants her to be happy.

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updated Jul 16 '10 by Gnattygan