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I was released from the hospital and headed straight for the cemetary. Ellie was being buried, but I could take comfort in that she was happy where she was. But I was the only one who knew that.

They were putting the coffin in to the ground as I arrived, so I slipped over to Nessie and stood silently whilst they finished up. While people were leaving I put flowers on her grave and smiled, thinking of how happy a life she would have. I didn't hate her for what she's done.

"You're out." whispered Nessie as we left.

"Yep. I have to go for a check up in a few weeks, but that's it."

"Thank goodness. Poor Ellie. I mean I know she did bad things, but I do think she didn't deserve this."

"I agree." I smiled at her. "So how are you and Luke?"

"Fine actually. We're dating."

"Oh finally!" I grinned and hugged her.

"Come on let's go home."

"Ah home. You know what, I'm going to have a party, and it's going to be the best of the year. And then I'm going to study like hell. My life is going to be better from now on. I'm going to live a great life!"

And I knew I was going to do that.

This is my second chance at life, and I'm going to make the most of it.

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Stargazer Real world:

Alex Kenley
Age: 17
Appearance: Long wavy, dyed- red hair, green eyes, 5'9"
Personality: Fairly stereotypical 'top' girl, although she does sometimes feel as though something is missing, and her grades are fairly good. Fashion lover, and is very cool.

Fairytale world:

Alexandria Riordana
Age: 18
Appearance: Long, firey red hair, green eyes, 5'9"
Personality: She discovers that she loves to ride horses, archery among other things, although she does like the outfits in the new world too.

Real world:

Sara Kenley
Age: 12
Appearance: Shoulder-length blonde hair, bluish-green eyes, 5'1"
Personality: Classic younger sibling. She does everything she can to annoy her sister, but she would take a bullet for her if the situation arose.

Fairytale world:

Shaylee Riordana
Age: 15
Appearance: Long, blonde hair, bluish-green eyes, 5'4"
Personality: Shaylee respects her duties as a princess, but that doesn't mean she doesn't like to have a little fun every now and then. She loves horseback riding, and has always wanted to try her hand at jousting. Of course, her parents wouldn't approve...

real world:
Logan Smith
Age: 17
Appearance: dark brown hair that reaches to his eyes, black colour eyes, tall with broad shoulders, his legs and arms are toned
Personality: cocky, he treats every girl as a prize to win, very superficial and shallow, great liar

Other world:
Aiden Windlord
Age: 19
Appearance: dark hair and and grey eyes, tall and lithe, his body is graceful and firm. Has a scar on the side of his forehead from a previous battle.
Personality: dutiful, stubborn, and concerned with his kingdom's affair. Has a carefree spirit at times, reckless, and a flirt. Great swordsman and rider.

real world:
name: Ellie Newton
age: 16
appearance: considered very pretty, tall and graceful, long legs that she likes to show off, wearing short skirts most of the time. long light blonde that reaches mid back, bright blue eyes, usually rimmed with black eyeliner.
personality: very two faced, to her friends faces she's all smiles and laughter behind their backs she'll be willing to betray them.

fantasy world:
name: Elizabeth Newton
age: same age
appearance: pretty much the same, although she tends to wear dresses more often in this world, rich extravagant dresses that reach her feet and show off her figure. usually wears her hair tied back with material that matches the colour of the dress.
personality: pretty much the same as in the real world, very two faced. tricks the girl into thinking she's her friend then betrays her

Real World:
Name: Vanessa 'Nessie' Jones
Age: 17
Appearance: 5"2, petite, long caramel blonde hair and hazel eyes. Usually wears comfortable jeans and loose jumpers.
Personality: Likes to hide behind her clothes so no one notices her. She's incredibly shy and introverted but also very loyal when others desert the people she cares about.
Other:

Fairytale World?:
Name: Aislinn Skydance
Age: 18
Appearance: Incredibly beautiful, 5"8, long blonde hair to her hips which usually has little braids plaited into it, emerald green eyes
Personality: Very confident and welcoming. She is willing to trust anyone at face value and always wants to see the best in people. Will be willing to die for someone she cares about. Very independent.

Real world

Name : Pippa Bramley
Age : 17
Appearance : Long Curly Blonde hair reaching down to chest, usually straightened and tied back into a long ponytail. ocean blue eyes, average height.
Personality : very friendly and warmhearted girl, very studious and is sometimes seen as the "Geek" has a few close friends."

Fairytale world:
Name: Courtney Diegan
Age: 17
Appearance - Very pretty, with long blonde hair, quite tall with bluey green eyes.
Personality - Very warmhearted and friendly, is a good influence on everyone she meets and has alot of amazing friends who she would die for""

Real world:
Eric Mitchell
Age: 17
Appearance: short and wiry, red hair, bright blue eyes hidden behind thick round glasses. Not particularly good looking. Asking to be picked on.
Personality: a bit of a teacher's pet. Very intelligent. Has a great memory. Shy, generally keeps his head down. Has been a loner all his life and doesn't expect anything else.

Fairytale world:
Nathaniel Firebrand
Age: 18
Appearance: same as before, except: shoulder-length red hair tied back in a ponytail. Wiry but strong and agile. Minus the glasses, which makes him much more pleasing to the eye, although still not handsome.
Personality: very learned. Finds he can handle a bow and short knives to his advantage although prefers to be a healer rather than a fighter. Has an affinity with animals. Said to be posessed of otherworldly powers.

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