5 Senses...Gone
I open my eyes but see only the lonely grey clouds
I unclog my ears but only hear the clouds tears hitting the ground
I trie the breath but only smell the saddness in the air.
I open my mouth to speak but instead taste the death in the air.
I feel lost and cold...even my hands can feel the nothingness around me.
I quietly suffer in these feelings, and I do it without complaining, because some of us are destined to live this way.
Forever and Always.
The End
RATE THIS CHAPTER!
Please login to rate this chapter!
RATINGS BREAKDOWN
1 COMMENT ABOUT THIS EXERCISE Feed
THE GOODS
You're currently reading the exercise
5 Senses...Gone, which
was posted on Mar 26, 2011 by
Silence.Dawns.
This is a collaborative exercise.
Some rights reserved.
This exercise is filed under:
Free-For-All
This exercise belongs to 2 groups:
Dark, Destructive, and Possibly Beautiful.
Young Writers
POST A COMMENT
Wanna say something? Make yourself heard!
We reserve the right to delete spam, flames, or other nasty stuff.