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theolin (Pete Badertscher)

a 34-year-old man from Ohio, United States

theolin

  Not much to tell here.  I like to read, write, and philosophize a lot.  Nothing much else gets done.

 

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"When love is not madness, it is not love. ~Pedro Calderon de la Barca Love is the condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own. ~Robert Heinlein"

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4 days ago
12:35am

theolin

updated the author guidance for Late Night InsightMature
12:33am

theolin

published Late Night InsightMature
19 days ago
11:35am

theolin

posted praise on IMMature
"The characters seem very believable and they gain your confidence."
29 days ago
1:53pm

theolin

added a marker for the story Adam and Eve, The Soap Opera: Scene 1
Dec 4, 2008
11:37am

theolin

posted a critique on Snow WhiteMature
"I would agree with ElzuWolfe. i like the parallel of the fairy tale, but would like the plot to unwind slower and add more detail. Great beginning i am waiting to read more ;)"
11:22am

theolin

added a marker for the story Snow White
11:18am

theolin

added a marker for the chapter De-briefed in the story Oh, What a Tangled Web We Weave....
11:14am

theolin

posted a critique on Oh, What a Tangled Web We Weave....Mature
"Good plot line. Kept my interest through all the chapters. I would personally like the hear more dialog and less narration so the emotions of the characters came out rather than explaining them...."
Dec 3, 2008
11:44am

theolin

posted a critique on Finding peace elsewhere
"This story is a lot of emotion. I can really feel for the woman and her family. I would like to see more deeper detail of the settings, and with the emotions involved, deeper details of the items..."
Dec 2, 2008
8:16pm

jordan

posted praise on wherehouse #1
"Yeah--those few changes made a difference. Can you tell? I like it...I get a slightly creepy, sad feeling reading it. Is that about what you were aiming for?"
5:44pm

theolin

posted a note on wherehouse #1
"OK i adjusted some of it see what you think in alternate not done. I could not figure out how to change the chapter title ;) I did not think of people not realizing that we can have non watery..."
5:40pm

theolin

posted a new chapter in wherehouse #1
5:30pm

theolin

updated the author guidance for wherehouse #1
2:04pm

jordan

posted a comment on wherehouse #1
"The imagery and language are exquisite, but there are a couple times the hoity word doesn't add meaning. The word "aqueous" distracted me. Was I missing a reason that you pointed out the pool was..."
11:43am

theolin

published wherehouse #1
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Late Night Insightmature

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