I'm a (possibly) aspiring author, just thought I'd try out some material on you guys, see if this is really what I'd like to spend the rest of my life doing.
Feel free to comment, criticize, whatever. Just tell me what you honestly think, okay?
"“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” –Mark Twain
“First get your facts; then you can distort them at your leisure.” -Mark Twain"
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"Lily is a 14 year old girl living in the world of Esmeral, a world which only consists of 2 groups of children: the orphaned and those in Schools. Lily is a Schoolgirl who is allowed to participate in the time-honored tradition of The Ritual: a growing-up ceremony, which takes children and brings them to the world of Adults. This world is supposedly fabulous and carefree, but Lily soon learns differently. Teaming up with her best friend, she must fight the oppressive Government to free both her"
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