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jait

a male from Canada

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I've a degree in--of all things--poetry.  It means I'm qualified to ask "Would you like fries with that?" in iambic pentameter.   I coordinate a couple of play-by-email roleplaying games that have become more like collaborative fiction than tabletop RPGs.

I'm sometimes pretty harsh in my opinion.  But then, Protagonize isn't a workshop forum.  I want to meet a character in the opening to a story and I want a promise--implied or stated--of tension and forthcoming change.  If I don't get those things, I rarely read past the first branch...

This is the first time I've been on a site dedicated to that purpose  Already, I can tell I've got to work at making my posts into smaller more-easily-digestible chunks...  It's taking a terrible effort of will not to follow up on my own branches...  I get so many ideas...

 When I'm not writing, I'm working, tabletop-gaming or taking photographs..  hence the website link to my gallery.

 

 

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"Stories aren't written about times when nothing happened. There has to be change, there has to be tension. A story's opening should hold a promise that the rest of the story complicates, extends and, eventually, resolves."

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "New feature, as requested: click the back arrow at the bottom of any chapter or branch to jump to previous segments of a story. Enjoy. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "No problem man. And I'm back from Hawaii and back at the office as of an hour ago. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Jason thanks for taking the reigns on restarting my story after Nick edited my stupidity! You definitely took it to a good start, you rock my socks!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Just added the ability to show a teaser from the previous branch or chapter when adding a new story fragment, based on your suggestion. Enjoy!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for kyrachristinex "How else would I expose them more?
Any idea's?
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for kyrachristinex "Thank you
that was a great boost=]
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "I don't think following up on your own branches is going to prevent anyone from continuing your stories. It's more about moderation, really; just trying to get enough into the story to build it the way you want it, but without creating an insurmountable obstacle to others who want to continue it.

I think that once I add some sort of author scratchpad next to stories where the original author can make notes about the direction of the story, etc., it may be a little less daunting to post in a story that already has a few chapters or branches.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "(that's a hairlip smiley face there)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "You have a degree in poetry? You should jump in on "Epic Nursery Rhyme For Strange Children"... because I'm sure nursery rhymes are your specialty... :?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Writers_Block "Jait, we're gettin' our tushies kicked by someone who has a mean streak in them for rating stories!!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Well, if you submit that detective story and it gets accepted for publication, please announce it (if not to everyone here, then to me!) I want to read the rest and see where it goes. The three chapters you published here sunk some hooks in me, and I want to see what happens next. And your writing in it impressed me greatly."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "I second that- the part about adding tags. (Down the road though it may be.) Especially along with the search thing, it would be handy."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Both are good suggestions (again, you're on a roll!).

The first is something I would like to get done soon, but not quite along the lines of what you suggest. I will offer some sort of preview of the parent post in a story when writing something new, though. It just won't be included in the body of the post you're writing (quote-style, as you suggested) because I really don't want someone else's content cluttering up new branches and chapters... it'll just be available to view when in edit mode to improve the UX while editing. Embedding it in the actual post could lead to legal issues with copyright that I'd rather not get into, as well.

As to allowing the addition or editing of tags in mid-story... I'm considering allowing users to suggest tags in mid-stream, and the author of the story will get the option to approve or decline a tag suggestion. That's a bit further down the road, mind you.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Hey, congrats on being the featured author this week!

(And what happened to the detective story? I was enjoying that, even if I didn't feel I had anything to contribute!)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Hey Jait,

Thanks for the suggestions! You hit on a few optimizations and usability enhancements I'd like to make, but there are a couple of things here that might be of use to you.

To answer some of your questions:

- Right now a random selection of orphaned stories shows up towards the bottom of the stories page. For the time being, I don't want to prune stories with no activity, as I think there are a variety of ways to avoid seeing them if you're not interested. Down the road, I'll probably work on some creative solution for either getting people to contribute to them or making them a little less visible.

- On the "recent comments" list, each comment should have a "jump to..." link that'll take you to the related story, branch, or author profile. I might change the wording to make it a little more obvious, but it is there.

- On each story branch, there should be a "the goods" section at the top of the right-hand column. Clicking the title of the story there will take you to the root of the story. Again, I may add an additional link to make it a little more obvious, as it's a tad small right now and probably not the most visible link.

- You should be able to see a list of all the authors who've favourited you (your author profile, at least) at the bottom of your profile page, in the center column, listed under "Who's favourited this author?". Seeing who's favourited your stories isn't currently visible to everyone, but I may add that in the future. As for tagging, that is a good idea, and I'll add it to my list of things to investigate, down the road when I've finished off some major features. :)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Not a problem! Thanks for your suggestions, too. I think some of them will come to pass in the next little while."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for LittleClaz "Thanks for the comment! Yeah I was slightly nervous but I just went for it. I really liked the story and I wanted to keep what was being said so I just built on what you did."

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