protagonize: interactive fiction & collaborative story writing community
Get more out of Protagonize! Login or sign up as member.

groovyblues

an 18-year-old dude

protagonize: author profile image for groovyblues

Just look at my picture,I'm a grey, square ,box man... Or am i?

No! I'm actually not a grey box man to let you know

Obviously!!! dudes

(for those who were gullible enough to even think of that and question if it were true,I'm concerned for your health. Well not really!,but get checked out you owe it to yourself  )

Iv decided I'd rather not reveal my name or place pictures on here, its a personal decision.

(Cause I'm truly a 600 pound hunchback,with many unappealing attributes,holla! but then again i could be lieing)

I'm just here to practice my writing and hopefully in anyway approve my ability.

I'm fairly new to writing ,so i apologize if what i write isn't up to your standards and bores you.Thats what I'm here for improvement .I enjoy reading and by the looks of things this site is filled with lots of excellent reading material.

 If you read my stories and give criticism that would be appreciated,not to harsh though just enough for me to improve those faults in my future writing.

Have a groovy day!

2.50
2

POST A COMMENT

Please login to post a comment.

1 COMMENT ABOUT THIS AUTHOR RSS

protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Hey GB - welcome to the site! Glad to hear you're up for some constructive criticism. I won't be too harsh, but I have an easy suggestion for you since you're just getting started.

Now, I think the first thing you'll probably want to do is run a quick spell check before posting. There's one built-in with Firefox (text should be underlined in red if it has errors), or you can click the toolbar button on the text editor when posting in Internet Explorer.

Cleaning up your spelling and grammar (and punctuation, for the sticklers) is always a good start. Spelling errors tend to detract from posts to the point where it's all people see, and they don't really pay attention to your writing itself. So by getting it fixed up right off the bat, people will focus on what you have to say, rather than how it was said.

Hope that helps!
"

AUTHOR POPULARITY

Like this author? Check this out:
excerpt from Gull Trouble   by Anduin

RECENT ACTIVITY RSS

Beyond The City Walls

Life Success

Wild Fox

Last Hike

Triping away

THE GOODS

STORY CATEGORIES

Support This Site

SPREAD THE WORD!