dereistic

"Seriously, what the hell are you on about? Firstly, you have quoted me twice as calling your writing "pathetic", which I have not done! Also, I did not express an opinion about your world view, or subject matter, I merely stated that it wasn't a "story", which it isn't - it is a rant written in first person. No anger on my part was implied. If this is your style and these thoughts are your character's and not your own then I apologise, although I sensed that you passionately believe that stuff, hence my statement. The idea of suicide as taboo and its treatment in society IS an interesting topic, but your expression of the "problem" is, as I said, vitriolic, angsty, immature and poorly written; if it is a character's view then we need context. I am not attacking you - that is just my opinion. Sorry if I upset you. Keep writing!"