Hi, fellow Protagonizers! I'm a beginner writer who have just started recently in hopes of writing a good story for game development. I need your feedback on the current written content, so please know that your comments are much appreciated, be it a compliment or criticism. I will try to keep content here as updated as on my wordpress site, but any updates will go there first as this is being used for game development as well so related content will be posted there too. Thank you for your time!