"Whenever I watch TV and see those poor starving kids all over the world, I can't help but cry. I mean I'd love to be skinny like that, but not with all those flies and death and stuff."--Mariah Carey As an engineer who was promoted out of engineering into management, I've written for years, but that is technical stuff. I have occasionally tried to write fiction and now its working ... slowly. Still working out the clunks that tech writing thrives on. So I'm finally published, my first paid for short story is out there in eWorld. I wish eCrit could go beyond "Oh Wow". Is that "Oh Wow" I like it you write fluent and literate english and have a wonderful sense of timing, suspense and surprise. Or is "Oh Wow" I've heard about perverts like you, your writings crap so spare me any future disgust and go and top yourself. Guess which one I believe.