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All discussion topics and comments posted in the last week.

Yesterday
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the page The First in the poem The Darkening Tale
"@KamakaizRaven Your very good, At least that is what I think. :D"
Yesterday at 1:30pm
KamakaizRaven
KamakaizRaven posted a comment on the page The First in the poem The Darkening Tale
"@Emmaroze thank you im not that good of a poet tho"
Yesterday at 1:24pm
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on the poem You
"@Emmarose Thanks. Feel free to comment on all my stuff :3"
Yesterday at 1:23pm
Nerathul
Nerathul posted a comment on ClockworkChaos's profile
"Hey thanks for becoming a fan! Also, welcome to protag :P"
Yesterday at 1:16pm
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the poem You
"Wow! Just amazing. ;)"
Yesterday at 1:16pm
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the page The First in the poem The Darkening Tale
"Great, I could visualize it! ;D"
Yesterday at 1:02pm
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on Almach's profile
"You going to write the next chapter? Or are you not sure what to write? o.0 (Sorry if I'm being pushy...)"
Yesterday at 12:58pm
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on the story Dark Angels and DemonsMature
"@Trish Fixed! and spotted a third lol xD"
Yesterday at 12:53pm
Stargazer
Stargazer posted a comment on Trish's profile
"Nope. I'm stranded for ages! :( Imagine Me & You: A woman (Piper Perabo) gets married and then within the next few weeks falls in love with a woman (Lena Heady) she met at her wedding. She's confused, never having liked a woman before, but just as she's given herself to Luce (Lena) by kissing her, she realises her husband knows somthing is wrong but is blaming himself. She runs back to him, telling him when he is drunk and asleep that she went crazy for someone else but she's staying with..."
Yesterday at 12:28pm
Trish
Trish posted a comment on the story Dark Angels and DemonsMature
"@Cat_Monty They're in the very first one :P"
Yesterday at 12:28pm
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on the page Revived in the story Dark Angels and DemonsMature
"@Trish Which chapter are these mistakes? My eyes are being blind xD"
Yesterday at 12:24pm
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on ClockworkChaos's profile
"Why hello there, welcome to protagonize :D"
Yesterday at 12:16pm
Trish
Trish posted a note on the story Dark Angels and DemonsMature
"Weather that* should be whether that* To chose to live* should be To choose to live* Those are the only mistakes I spotted but apart from that, great start!"
Yesterday at 12:16pm
ivybee
ivybee created the topic Jasmine Purple Diary in the Dark, Destructive, and Possibly Beautiful. group
Yesterday at 11:41am
ivybee
ivybee created the topic Jasmine Purple Diary in the Shameless Self Promotion group
Yesterday at 11:37am
Trish
Trish posted a comment on Stargazer's profile
"Ah, I was thinking it might be sooner then that :P My mum's birthday is on the 14th of August :D What are those two about [Imagine Me and You and Game of Thrones]? :D You should do a scene where Lena visits the cemetery, for her ex you know, and she could break down a little. it could be after she's come to the realization she's falling for the new girl. and whose perspective are you going to write it in?"
Yesterday at 11:23am
KikiW
KikiW created the topic Just brainstorming with a new idea, want to know what others think of it. HELP! in the Critiques Wanted group
Yesterday at 11:00am
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a comment on the page Four Gold Pieces in the story Riches, Treasures and False Advertising
"@Littleink It good. that's all that matters. :)"
Yesterday at 10:46am
Stargazer
Stargazer posted a comment on Trish's profile
"August. Yeah I've watched it. Today in fact! She's good in that. I love her in Imagine Me & You. That's where I first found her, and then I've watched her in other things since, like Game of Thrones. Hehe exactly! Trying to avoid that! Hmmm... well, I imagine there'll be a moment when the girl is over one day that she gets awkward because she feels like she's betraying the girl who died. And I'm thinking possibly she sees her with the friend she goes to uni with and gets a little jealous..."
Yesterday at 10:30am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the page Chapter 1 - The Queen of The Dead in the story Christabel Mordsa Book IMature
"She sounds like a bada** xD I like her a lot now xD !!"
Yesterday at 10:25am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on the story Christabel Mordsa Book IMature
"@Emmaroze Well thats the image I had when this story began...then it morphed into this. :3 Wait till ya get through Chapter 3"
Yesterday at 10:17am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@DamienLeniart Hmm.. Yes that is true."
Yesterday at 10:16am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@Emmaroze Writing stories are easy. Writing great ones are hard."
Yesterday at 10:15am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the story Christabel Mordsa Book IMature
"I like how you explained her look. Made her sound amazing to know. xD"
Yesterday at 10:15am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@DamienLeniart Why I don't write stories xD . Poetry just comes easily to me."
Yesterday at 10:14am
Trish
Trish posted a comment on Stargazer's profile
"When's your birthday? :D 300. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/300_(film) Yeah, otherwise it would be really just..cheesy and typical. :) Um now for another question...when do you think Lena will begin to realize that she's falling for the girl?"
Yesterday at 10:12am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@Emmaroze Gah but writing this 4th chapter is............difficult. Mainly because I'm setting up the world. It's just, like building a castle with sand. Tough as hell xD"
Yesterday at 10:12am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@DamienLeniart Ohh nice! xD .."
Yesterday at 10:10am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@Emmaroze Oh believe me I suffer through the same problem. That's why I write with Word or LibreOffice so that the spell checker does my job for me on the spelling and grammar stuff xD"
Yesterday at 10:09am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@DamienLeniart Your comments made me smile, and yes I do love to sing and thanks for pointing out the errors. Sometimes I write to fast xD ."
Yesterday at 10:08am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@Emmaroze Not a problem. Mind reading all of this and leaving your feedback? http://www.protagonize.com/story/christabel-mordsa-book-i"
Yesterday at 10:07am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@DamienLeniart Wow thank you so much!"
Yesterday at 10:06am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"Sooo I just went through all your work and find you a amazing writer! :D Gahh keep it up."
Yesterday at 9:54am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem A Mistake
"Other then a few mistakes ( "Were not perfect" should be "We're not perfect) there's a extra space between "We" and "were" in the line "We were dead from the start") this is very good! Keep it up!"
Yesterday at 9:53am
ofclouds
ofclouds posted a comment on angel-of-darkness's profile
"thanks"
Yesterday at 9:51am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Something
"If you'd like to learn how to write stories I'm sure I could help ya, and if your poems are any indication, you're going to be a great writer. This, again, is excellent."
Yesterday at 9:50am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Life
"Interesting. It's like you're writing with your mind singing songs. Its awesome because I do that :D"
Yesterday at 9:47am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Stay
"Awesome! Very well done. Gahh you're amazing at writing."
Yesterday at 9:43am
Aoife.J.Sherwood
Aoife.J.Sherwood posted a comment on MattForgenti's profile
"We haven't, it's mad. LONDONNNNN (man oh man, I've been to London more times this month than I have in my whole life. Nice place...not that you'd know... ¬_¬) Might be able to later, that's when we're picking up my laptop. Right now I'm on the home computer that was made in the Stone Age, and therefore doesn't have Skype."
Yesterday at 9:42am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Alone in the end
"There's a few spelling/grammar mistakes ("their is", should be there is) but this is very cool. I love your work"
Yesterday at 9:40am
Stargazer
Stargazer posted a comment on Trish's profile
"It does it does. Well hoping that I get one for my birthday. Haha which movie? Yeah she's pretty :D Ha thanks that should help. Um well, I was thinking that she helps her out, maybe Lena is redecorating, or carrying something heavy... I dunno. But they get talking and it grows slowly. I want it to be realistic, not too chick flick romance type thing, you know, it's not all flowers and hearts. There are problems for both of them with opening up their hearts and it's a relationship built on the..."
Yesterday at 9:38am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem AbuseMature
"There's something incredible about the way you write that makes me want to see so much more. Love it"
Yesterday at 9:37am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Depressed FigureMature
"Other then one spelling mistake (waste), this is really good. You have a wonderful way with words. Impressive"
Yesterday at 9:34am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Just A DreamMature
"This is excellent. Something tells me you have written a awesome prologue to a story. I'd love to see more."
Yesterday at 9:31am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted praise on the poem Forevermore
"This is awesome. Short and sweet, makes it more memorable. Part of me thinks it could be longer, but then again it's because your a good writer :D"
Yesterday at 9:30am
Nyxie
Nyxie posted a comment on Trish's profile
"You're welcome, it deserved it! :)"
Yesterday at 9:25am
MattForgenti
MattForgenti posted a comment on Aoife.J.Sherwood's profile
"We need to talk. We haven't done so for waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long. LONDONNNNN."
Yesterday at 9:21am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on Emmaroze's profile
"@Trish Np and thanks xD"
Yesterday at 9:20am
Emmaroze
Emmaroze posted a comment on the poem Something
"@KamakaizRaven Aww lol."
Yesterday at 9:19am
Trish
Trish posted a comment on Stargazer's profile
"Oh gosh that sucks! :/ I really hope you get a new laptop fast! That sounds really good. The characterization for Lena would be very strong once you incorporate this into the story. I've only seen her in one movie xD 300 but she looked really pretty so I Google-Imaged her and WOW. :P That would be a good ending. :D And a happy one for the friend she goes to university with. Why do you think that the girl should be attracted to Lena though [apart from her being tremendously good looking]?..."
Yesterday at 8:59am
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