All topics & comments

All discussion topics and comments posted in the last week.

2 days ago
GalacticNebula
GalacticNebula posted a comment on the story The Department
"i really like this storie. enjoyed reading what you have right now and i hope to read more works in the future."
Yesterday at 4:52pm
bartkc
bartkc posted a comment on the page Less Than Human, finale in the story Less Than Human
"@YoungTolkein Thanks for the feedback!"
Yesterday at 4:43pm
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the story One long night
"This is such a gripping concept, very well written and with only a couple of amendments (as mentioned below) to make it truly brilliant. Definitely looking to read more of this quality. Also to anyone reading this, I have just finished a spy thriller called The Department and I'd greatly appreciate anyone's feedback on that, so if you have time then I'd be grateful for any kind of comment about it."
Yesterday at 2:38pm
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein created the topic Looking for critique for The Department. in the Critiques Wanted group
Yesterday at 2:29pm
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Less Than Human, finale in the story Less Than Human
"I realise this may be presumptuous but if you have time I'd love you to give some feedback on my own story The Department, a spy thriller. I can only say that your opinion and feedback would certainly be appreciated and helpful."
Yesterday at 2:26pm
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Less Than Human, finale in the story Less Than Human
"I am loving this story. It's very nicely written and a great idea to boot. This is definitely something that I would add to my bookshelf. I eagerly look forward to any further projects that are posted."
Yesterday at 2:25pm
CassieK
CassieK posted a comment on the page Night Life in the story Familiars
"@YoungTolkein thank you :)"
Yesterday at 2:19pm
Aoife.J.Sherwood
Aoife.J.Sherwood posted a comment on GoldenEarthAngel's profile
"Well, the uni buildings might not be exactly what I wanted, but I think it's true to say that York is an old and more beautiful looking city than Reading. Cobbled streets, old fashioned sweet shops and vintage boutiques, that was the drive for me. I just stood on the streets and it felt so right, like the closest feeling to home I'd ever felt. So I'm making do with the grotty uni buildings for the quality of the course and the to-die-for atmosphere. Oh yes, can't have a fantasy world without..."
Yesterday at 1:34pm
Eshaiel
Eshaiel posted a comment on Eshaiel's profile
"@Leila.Archer Always glad to be of service. :)"
Yesterday at 1:31pm
Leila.Archer
Leila.Archer posted a comment on Eshaiel's profile
"XD Thanks Eshaiel. I jut now got this comment because I'm still figuring out Protagonize and all that. I'll remember that. You'll learn later that the back-and-forthiness is a characteristic of Hawkin's that becomes really obvious in later chapters, so I guess I portrayed that well! And I'll remember the whole having faith in self thing, something I've never been very good at!@ (Maybe that's what I need to improve on more.) I'll try to make Hawkin and Madolin's interactions seem more..."
Yesterday at 1:26pm
Randomnese
Randomnese posted a comment on riptearton's profile
"To be honest, I'm not quite sure. I just used the word for the title as a prompt and wrote something short, which I suppose everyone else did as well :) Good luck! Really? That's great (I'm not alone! Haha) :D"
Yesterday at 1:04pm
wolfiebrewer
wolfiebrewer posted a comment on wolfiebrewer's profile
"@Immzie not a problem!"
Monday at 12:46pm
starwarsfreak117
starwarsfreak117 posted a comment on the page Lortu: Meeting Aldrear in the exercise Star Wars: The Storming of The Enclave
"Ah k I see, it's not a big problem, I see a god lead in that I will work nicely."
Monday at 12:45pm
Immzie
Immzie posted a comment on wolfiebrewer's profile
"and thanks for becoming a fan."
Monday at 12:30pm
wolfiebrewer
wolfiebrewer posted a comment on wolfiebrewer's profile
"@Immzie Thanks~!"
Monday at 12:24pm
wolfiebrewer
wolfiebrewer posted a comment on LanceKairan's profile
"HIIII XD"
Monday at 12:22pm
Immzie
Immzie posted a comment on wolfiebrewer's profile
"hi! welcome to protagonize! :)"
Monday at 12:21pm
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on hufflepuffatheart's profile
"Yeah, my dad thought they'd make a new series in the modern world with Merlin being older, but I doubt they'd really ruin it that way o.0"
Monday at 11:39am
CallieIsAFreak
CallieIsAFreak posted a comment on the page Kieran: The Bruiser Chief in the story Rainbow Eyes
"Thanks for the patience :) It's a good chapter, I like how you portrayed Chief Takoda."
Monday at 11:37am
neoHalcyon
neoHalcyon posted praise on the page The Winter Witch in the story ApplesMature
"I really like the viewpoints in this! It kinda confused me at first but then it was a little easier."
Monday at 10:53am
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a comment on the page .01 Terror: Slums in the story GlitchedMature
"@JeromeR.Vandamme Ya. It is a pimp. Hard to explain. But it'll make sense later."
Monday at 10:50am
neoHalcyon
neoHalcyon posted a critique on the page Crater in the story ApplesMature
"Good story thus far, but I see some comma errors. You should go through and check that. I'm interested by this."
Monday at 10:49am
JeromeR.Vandamme
JeromeR.Vandamme posted a comment on the page .01 Terror: Slums in the story GlitchedMature
"So far the story's interesting, but are you sure you mean 'pimp'? Sorry to be so awkward, but..."
Monday at 10:49am
Seraphim'sZephyr
Seraphim'sZephyr posted a comment on the page Lortu: Meeting Aldrear in the exercise Star Wars: The Storming of The Enclave
"@starwarsfreak117 Whoops, Sorry. I could change it a bit if you wanted... the thing was that the collab hadn't been updated for a while, usually I like a cushion of at least 2 chapters before I post mine, and since that wasn't here I sort of continued the story I was going on, which was originally supposed to be a lead for you, but since you didn't post, I just sort of went with it."
Monday at 10:43am
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a comment on the page Fion: Wake-up in the story Riches, Treasures and False Advertising
"Sorry it took so long. I had so much trouble with this page...."
Monday at 10:38am
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a comment on frosty_the_lindo's profile
"@Ratthias Your welcome! It's interesting. :D"
Monday at 10:35am
JeromeR.Vandamme
JeromeR.Vandamme posted a comment on Randomnese's profile
"@Randomnese Ha! Setting fire to things is great joy ^.^ Ah, thanks. I got a critique back on my novel, and my friend didn't really like the characters...so yeah, I'm glad you like him. I'd write more often, but it's exam week... Shame :( Yeah, I used to, but now I literally force myself to write only the stuff that I've put up: the novel, MFIB. It's hard, but the sense of achievement is worth it (though of course sometimes it's good to deviate :P). What kind of dialogues do you write? How long..."
Monday at 9:58am
hufflepuffatheart
hufflepuffatheart posted a comment on Cat_Monty's profile
"Yay :) The end was really heartbraking but since Arthur died in the legends I already saw it coming, but I think it's adorable that Merlin is waiting for him to rise again. They did leave a lot of things unanswered though, which I didn't like either."
Monday at 9:45am
DethnusAckearose
DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the story Familiars
"@YoungTolkein Thanks man. I can't take all the credit for this idea, as CassieK was responsible as well."
Monday at 9:39am
Cat_Monty
Cat_Monty posted a comment on hufflepuffatheart's profile
"Love Doctor Who, Sherlock and Merlin too :) Though I didn't like the ending of Merlin to be honest...xD"
Monday at 9:20am
JeromeR.Vandamme
JeromeR.Vandamme posted a comment on thefutureisbright's profile
"@thefutureisbright Oh, my God! Sorry about the late reply, though...how did it go? :) Yeah, I'll try and stay on top of it. I'll have more time, though... Do you find you have more time as an A level student? Oh, and - do teachers treat you better? Because here, we're one month off freedom age but we're still treated like five-year-olds. -.- Wow! This appeals to my inner nerd...what were the differences between the two countries then? :P Before I forget...care to add?..."
Monday at 9:13am
hector
hector posted a comment on hector's profile
"Read » Poetry » bright eyes bright eyes Page published by thefutureisbright on April 12, 2013. About the author: I do not write prose, and nor am I a poet. I am a rambler. A drabbler. I post rather short autobiographical pieces. They're my whole life, and yet mean nothing to me. Strange, really. View profile » RecommendFavouriteActionsShare I am in a strange mood tonight. I am not a great prose writer. Nor am I a poet. I am a rambler. A drabbler. That is all I seem to be able to write, right..."
Monday at 9:11am
hufflepuffatheart
hufflepuffatheart posted a comment on MattForgenti's profile
"Yeah :D I read on your profile that you play RPG's, those are my favourite games as well :) Oh I really can't wait till I get to go!! Just a few more weeks! <3 And I'd love to, but I'm a bit busy with school right now, so maybe in the summer? :)"
Monday at 8:50am
DethnusAckearose
DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the story Mech Collab (Working Title)
"@YoungTolkein Thank you. Hopefully it will be updated weekly at the latest."
Monday at 8:48am
hufflepuffatheart
hufflepuffatheart posted a comment on Ratthias's profile
"Yeah me too :c Jara was definitely my OTP! </3 I've shipped them for so long (I grew up with the original show). It took them two seasons to get together, and just a few episodes to break up! I really like your story Shadows, I'm really curious to see where it's heading :) Btw, glad that you liked Young and Stupid :D"
Monday at 8:45am
MattForgenti
MattForgenti posted a comment on hufflepuffatheart's profile
"Sweet, a gamer girl! And Hamtaro was an awesome show. And I just got back from Harry Potter World a few weeks ago. AWESOME! If you're interested, I'd love to do a collab with you sometime about magic. I think we'd work well together."
Monday at 8:40am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Escape in the exercise The Killer's GameMature
"Can't wait for the next page. Seriously liking this concept."
Monday at 8:35am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Night Life in the story Familiars
"This is a great idea and I can't wait for the next page"
Monday at 8:26am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the story Mech Collab (Working Title)
"Nice page, looking forward to reading on with this story."
Monday at 8:24am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Kaine: Some Kind of Interview? in the exercise Hired GunsMature
"This idea has already got me hooked. Reading on will definitely be enjoyable"
Monday at 8:21am
riptearton
riptearton posted a comment on Randomnese's profile
"Oh yeah, and for the mini saga thing; do I have to follow on from the previous story, or can I just start my own? (I've never done thing before haha)"
Monday at 8:19am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the story Learning Magic
"Nice style of writing and the idea seems solid. I'll enjoy reading on."
Monday at 8:19am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the story what happens to the freaks.Mature
"Like the idea here, will definitely enjoy reading on."
Monday at 8:17am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on YoungTolkein's profile
"The Department is a new spy fiction I've been working on. The first three chapters are up already and I hope you'll have a read and decide you want to read more. All feedback, comments and criticism welcomed as long as constructive. I'll happily return the favour to anyone who has a read and let's me know what they think."
Monday at 8:15am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page A Moment of Our Choosing~ Part Three in the story The Heart of a Halfling
"This is a great concept, looking forward to the next page."
Monday at 8:14am
riptearton
riptearton posted a comment on Randomnese's profile
"Thanks! That was actually really helpful haha Now that I think about it, that is actually a pretty logical way of going about it haha And don't worry, I do that all the time too (being in a scenario and relating it to a character)"
Monday at 8:12am
YoungTolkein
YoungTolkein posted a comment on the page Sebastian- Waiting in the story Shadows
"enjoying this a lot, it's a nice idea and I'm looking forward to the next installment"
Monday at 8:10am
GoldenEarthAngel
GoldenEarthAngel posted a comment on Aoife.J.Sherwood's profile
"Man, doesn't sound like my kind of university. Got to have me some old architecture around. :) Tehe :) Incest? o.O To be fair, the parents of my MC are cousins, but that's because they're incredibly-snooty upper-class, which all seem to do that. Do you watch/have you watched Downton Abbey? Yeah :) There's no use having an author writing only one thing. Good for us."
Monday at 8:06am
JeromeR.Vandamme
JeromeR.Vandamme posted a comment on the work Linee per Laurie
"@PhiltheGeek Fantastico! Forse un giorno posso andare a vedere... :)"
Monday at 8:06am
JeromeR.Vandamme
JeromeR.Vandamme posted a comment on the story Home Remembered Not
"@Jezebel Sorry for the late reply... OK, fair enough. Why wouldn't he think he was a man? To help you, take this sentence, for instance: "He helped the old 'boy' to his feet." It could have just been "old man" to his feet, since now we're seeing the man being helped to his feet, which is not necessarily from the man's point of view. Hope I clarified...a little... :)"
Monday at 8:04am
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