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Aoife.J.Sherwood posted a comment on GoldenEarthAngel's profile

"If there was an old building, as in a couple centuries old, I'd go for that in a heartbeat. Sadly, the oldest courts are from the sixties and they're not in great condition. Don't have that problem with Royal Holloway, but it can't be helped. Cool stuff, glad I have some influence. Haha, always works out that way. I can barely remember my original plot line, though its probably too horrible to bear remembering. Haha, I have a similar issue, only with first cousins once removed not being so..."

1 hr ago

Hypaethral posted a comment on Jasemi's profile

"Thank you again for becoming a fan as well! :)"

2 hrs ago

xkatieshepherd posted a comment on the story NaNo Zombies - SequelMature

"Nah :P We couldn't wait hehe Thanks! Appreciate it :)"

3 hrs ago

CallieIsAFreak posted a comment on the page Kieran: The Bruiser Chief in the story Rainbow Eyes

"Hey, cool to see you've added a chapter :) I'm doing my Leaving Cert in a month so I wont be able to write til then, but after that I shall attempt to continue the story :)"

3 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic Spy Fiction - The Department in the Young Adult Fiction group

3 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic New member in the WUPIS ~ We Use Pens Instead of Swords group

4 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic New member in the Writers unclassified group

4 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic Hi Guys, Newcomer in the stories group

4 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic New Spy Fiction - The Department in the Shameless Self Promotion group

4 hrs ago

YoungTolkein created the topic New Spy Fiction in the Collaborative Corner group

4 hrs ago

tylerdidit posted a comment on the exercise NaNo ZombiesMature

":D hope you enjoy it. We will get round to editing it some time, there are bits that'll get cut out, but writing the sequel is far more entertaining, don't you think? ;)"

4 hrs ago

Efi posted a comment on the story Pesticide

"@Drlauram thank you very much! I'm happy that my story was able to entertain as well and not only send me to see a shrink... (-:"

6 hrs ago

Efi posted a comment on the story Pesticide

"@mali22 Thank you very much! Your comment made me edit the story and seperate the first line from the rest of the story, and I think it adds to the emphasise of the point you just raised. Thanks!"

6 hrs ago

Jezebel posted a comment on Randomnese's profile

"(Looking from an outsider's point-of-view - we sound absolutely crackers.) (And the YouTube search Harlem Shake thing?!) *We arrive on a cliff, and, glancing at each other and grasping hands, we cliff-dive, the fireball chasing us in our wake* Oh, of course, madame, nothing but politeness! :D Probably just put it on my bedside table and read it whenever until I finish it.... I always do that with unknown books. :P (Haha, no, she just knocked it wide open!) ERMAGHERSH!!! *"OctoExpandosOrangeo!"..."

6 hrs ago

Jezebel posted a comment on Randomnese's profile

"Uh. Like. You like. Uh. Write the . Uh. Thing?"

6 hrs ago

Jezebel posted a comment on xKatanaXIV's profile

"Haha, er, thanks? :P [Ageism... ;) ] Thanks, it was just a lot of desperate ramblings! :) I've really been blessed, and I'm so used to it, that it pretty much scares the living daylights out of me to think I'll ever have to be without them... :/ (That sounds pretty vain... couldn't put it any other way.) Thank you so much! :D And hopefully I'll be able to redeem myself in a way that my writing and creatvity will stay. And again, thank you. :) x [That metaphorically shows that you don't alas..."

6 hrs ago

YoungTolkein posted a comment on YoungTolkein's profile

"Hi to anyone out there. Just got back after a very long Hiatus. Have uploaded a new project that was completed recently. Have a look and let me know what you guys think."

7 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story The WeddingMature

"Nicely done. You build the tension slowly and we really feel the constrast of the happy with the sad. There are many language mistakes that need addressing. I will write just a few of them: the day in which/ the day on which going to covenant - covenant is not a verb in a sunny day/ on a sunny day Golan was A handsome... so gentle (gentleman is a noun not an adjective) the happiest man in the world who found his loss. (?) ye/yes Miss or Ms. in worse cases.. (there are more - please go..."

9 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story Fire

"Good descriptions and atmosphere building. A few comments: I think it can be shortened by reducing some of the dialogue. Language issues. There are quite a few ; i will just mention a couple but please go through everything again and fix. plunk/plank foolish/fool didn't do anything to prevent what? (sounds like the rain) distained/distainful spited/spat Or should I say "worked"?/or should I say "did you work?" inflamer + igniting/ arsonist arson"

9 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story Pesticide

"Really interesting and spooky! Not just a story, but a social commentary. Makes us think as well as entertaining us. That is quite a level! well done."

9 hrs ago

Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile

"(I have not a clue of what information he would have stolen :S Our ramblings cannot be all that interesting.) (I definitely have!) *We dive through treetops, catching branches in our dash to lose the dragon, but he breathes a fireball that chases us through the trees, burning down the forest* Hahaha, I hope that was in polite jest ;P When do you plan to do it? Will it be in a single, non-stop session or perhaps, a series of pages per day until completion? (Hahaha! I hope she didn't knock the..."

9 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story One long night

"I agree - this is fantastic. I was gripped by it from start to finish. And the ending - wow. A shock. You need to do quite a bit of work on some of the language here. I'll give you some examples. When we talk about Gd, we use upper case (also He) a rose among the thorns (not thrones) this is usually used to describe a beautiful woman amongst men. The first one (not ones) stern (lower case) verbal, not literal, abuse. we're together in this There are others too. Fixing these will make a..."

9 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story Heart Beat

"This was really good, Sarah! There was action, character, drama, all important elements in a short story. I like the tension we feel from the dead girl and the frustration she feels at not being able to talk. You also capture the bargaining that goes on when people are deparate, as we see in the mother's promises. You have some small language issues that you should fix: stroke = struck; "She told me how close you are from each other"/ to each other; a warmth feeling/a warm feeling. There might..."

9 hrs ago

Drlauram posted a comment on the story Home Sweet Home

"Amira - nice descriptions; you manage to enter her head and describe how she feels. A few things to think about: 1. tenses. You have many tenses in this story and they are not always consistent. Go through the story again and correct the tenses where neccessary. 2. A story needs something to happen. Nothing has really occured here. We only have her thoughts, and |I feel we are missing the plot element."

9 hrs ago

Randomnese posted a comment on JeromeR.Vandamme's profile

"@JeromeR.Vandamme Wow, such dedication to be accurate! I kind of have a thing for the naughty. And those that enjoy blowing things up as much as I do :D His anger is quite interesting, as it rages over his moral compass. I struggle with writers block everyday, hahaha. I just power through it and will myself to start writing a couple words or phrases that surface, then dive into my thoughts to write, so I do end up writing everyday, just not stories (usually some sort of idea fleshed out into..."

10 hrs ago

Yesterday

Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile

"Oh my! Oh no! What do I do with this? D:"

11 hrs ago

xKatanaXIV posted a comment on Jezebel's profile

"Whoa you're only 13??? I never would have guessed from your writing!!!! I read "Please Don't Take My Writing" just now and it totally blew my mind. You're like a revolutionary of words. . . .if that makes sense. I also started writing/creating at a young age. Although I can't draw very well; you're quite blessed to be able to express yourself through drawing as well as writing. In all, I just wanted to say that I found your piece to be relatable as well as a complete work of genius. Raw, deep..."

11 hrs ago

xKatanaXIV posted praise on the exercise Please Don't Take My Writing

"Amazing!"

11 hrs ago

neoHalcyon posted a comment on neoHalcyon's profile

"@Jezebel Oh, I already have a question. I've got a spoken word poem and you seem pretty adept at the style... care to critique it? It's called "The Last Children in the Woods.""

Yesterday at 10:19pm

Burndtree posted a comment on nickb's profile

"HeyO, Nick. Thanks for your info. Re the tags box not appearing on the story edit page: No joy from my home machine. Running XP Home SP2. IE 8. Just updated Java to V7 (update21). Even fiddled with the popup blocker. No joy. TAGS box appears on my machine at work. Windows 7 Pro. IE 10. I went into multiple works, edited, entered tags, saved out - quick n'easy. I didn't get a chance to test on an old XP machine at work running Chrome. I'm going to google around for some impartial opinions..."

Yesterday at 10:08pm

RachaelRunes posted a comment on the poem Diluted Air.

"You're very welcome! And well said. I am always fascinated by the myriad of ways people respond to the same thing for that very reason. Let it be a poem, song lyrics, or a good novel, it all speaks to us in a different way. It's how people who live miles apart, people who may never meet, can, in a sense, connect on an intimate level. Through ideas and recognizing aspects of ourselves in things written or composed, we know that we're not alone."

Yesterday at 10:03pm

Jezebel posted a comment on Randomnese's profile

"*PEW, PEW, PEW!* Look out, ma'am, you've just been tagged!! http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/didnt-you-just-love-mini-sagas/213589"

Yesterday at 9:45pm

Jezebel posted a comment on faucer's profile

"You've just been tagged. http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/didnt-you-just-love-mini-sagas/213589"

Yesterday at 9:43pm

Jezebel posted a comment on Randomnese's profile

"(As you should be! But thankfully, I stole back the information he took, and he seemed in no mood to pursue... unless he'll steal it back when we aren't looking... O.O Oh, fudge. @DamienLeniart is gonna GET IT!!) (LOLOL, have you done the Google search barrel roll thing? XD) *Suddenly, a dragon comes breathing green fire, and we skedaddle, a chase ensuing* Hah! Uh, I mean, um. I would be delighted to ever do so, madame. ;) Huh... oh, crap, well, now you tell me! It's on my New Year's..."

Yesterday at 9:31pm

Burndtree posted a comment on the story NaNo Zombies - SequelMature

":D Not gonna wait for NaNoWriMo...? Or...this'll work...simply add another 50,000 wordies come November, yeah. I am a fan of your first story, I'll be reading."

Yesterday at 9:27pm

Burndtree posted praise on the exercise NaNo ZombiesMature

"CONGRATZ ! xkatieshepherd. tyler. Finito'd your first draft :) I'm pdf'ing away your 153,079 words now for a leisurely read. Over probably a week..."

Yesterday at 9:20pm

Jasemi posted a comment on Analuein's profile

"Hey, welcome to Protagonize! :)"

Yesterday at 8:20pm

karlienezbozo posted a comment on karlienezbozo's profile

"@Perplexingartist Sorry for responding so late, but thank you sweethart<3"

Yesterday at 7:57pm

Jasemi posted praise on the story ApplesMature

"This whole story so far is amazing. I'm really looking forward to more pages!"

Yesterday at 7:50pm

percisaurus posted a comment on the page Sara discovers the doorway brought her to another world in the story In the Dark

"@Puckboy Thank you so much! The names didn't come naturally. Took some research and thought. I'm really enjoying writing with you and hope to continue doing so!"

Yesterday at 6:49pm

iamkathybrown13 posted a comment on the poem I Am Not Your Rabbit

"Heatless constellations winking in his eyes Great line! I really liked this poem! It reminds me of one of my more jerkoff-y characters."

Yesterday at 4:56pm

Puckboy posted praise on the page Sara discovers the doorway brought her to another world in the story In the Dark

"Wow, Percisaurus. Reading this page felt like something I had written. There was so much that I liked about this post: the names, your wonderful display of Sara's bewilderment, but most of all this sentence -- "This man might be her undoing." It is a simple enough sentence, yet for me it punctuates this whole post. Liked it."

Yesterday at 2:38pm

Gabriel posted a comment on Eloosive's profile

"Great pic, Eloo! How are you and the little one doing? I haven't been around in a while, but I was just wondering: Any chance we'll return to How the Best Was Won?"

Yesterday at 2:35pm

DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars

"Haha, I know the feeling, but it's Cass' turn. Just be patient, Kiddo!"

Yesterday at 1:39pm

Lt.Nuke posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars

"@DethnusAckearose Thanks, but now I want to write more! I like this idea a lot."

Yesterday at 1:37pm

Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile

"(I am absolutely horrified that I wasn't there in your time of need! I suppose we will have to exact revenge of some sort on this DamienLeniart!) *sprouts large, fluffy wings from shoulder blades and start doing barrel rolls in the sky* (Oh my, that just reminded me that I need to work on Bless! Bah..) Ah! Another word for a grammar-nazi. How interesting! I might actually take you up on that job if ever requested :P I've done that (super bored day..) and it was not fun. It's incomparable with..."

Yesterday at 1:27pm

DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars

"Nice nice nice. That Warden will be the Vice President btw and her powers are not magic, but the null of magic. To a magician of any kind, she is kryptonite. Only problem is that she is bound to the school. I haven't worked out all the kinks, but we will get there. I like this character.... INteresting."

Yesterday at 1:27pm

Perplexingartist posted a comment on Divs's profile

"Well, thank you."

Yesterday at 1:19pm

Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile

"@Jezebel OKAY! (blindly attempts to type) slhfw ajer jhrkj,waenk3h"

Yesterday at 1:10pm

Randomnese posted a comment on riptearton's profile

"Haha, I suppose only time will tell, although I can say right now I am extremely pumped with the idea and concepts. Is that because of the loss of motivation? When figuring out a character, do you develop a back story/past for your characters?"

Yesterday at 1:02pm

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