All topics & comments

All discussion topics and comments posted in the last week.

Today
DethnusAckearose
DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars
"Haha, I know the feeling, but it's Cass' turn. Just be patient, Kiddo!"
50 mins ago
Lt.Nuke
Lt.Nuke posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars
"@DethnusAckearose Thanks, but now I want to write more! I like this idea a lot."
52 mins ago
Randomnese
Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile
"(I am absolutely horrified that I wasn't there in your time of need! I suppose we will have to exact revenge of some sort on this DamienLeniart!) *sprouts large, fluffy wings from shoulder blades and start doing barrel rolls in the sky* (Oh my, that just reminded me that I need to work on Bless! Bah..) Ah! Another word for a grammar-nazi. How interesting! I might actually take you up on that job if ever requested :P I've done that (super bored day..) and it was not fun. It's incomparable with..."
1 hr ago
DethnusAckearose
DethnusAckearose posted a comment on the page Tarrus Gaffery in the story Familiars
"Nice nice nice. That Warden will be the Vice President btw and her powers are not magic, but the null of magic. To a magician of any kind, she is kryptonite. Only problem is that she is bound to the school. I haven't worked out all the kinks, but we will get there. I like this character.... INteresting."
1 hr ago
Perplexingartist
Perplexingartist posted a comment on Divs's profile
"Well, thank you."
1 hr ago
Randomnese
Randomnese posted a comment on Jezebel's profile
"@Jezebel OKAY! (blindly attempts to type) slhfw ajer jhrkj,waenk3h"
1 hr ago
Randomnese
Randomnese posted a comment on riptearton's profile
"Haha, I suppose only time will tell, although I can say right now I am extremely pumped with the idea and concepts. Is that because of the loss of motivation? When figuring out a character, do you develop a back story/past for your characters?"
1 hr ago
Randomnese
Randomnese posted a comment on MossyMeadow's profile
"How shocking, I would not have known that from reading. Perhaps, although the popularity of a character is a result of the popularity of the personality. I've noticed that you also like to write fan fiction for Pokemon. Do you write a lot of fan fiction in your off time?"
1 hr ago
Gabriel
Gabriel posted a comment on the page A Weapon in the story Back to the Light
"Finally! Sorry for the wait, this semester just about beat the stuffing out of me and I simply couldn't find time to write anything at all. But hoping we can get this moving again over the summer. We're getting close to The End (?!)."
1 hr ago
thefutureisbright
thefutureisbright posted a comment on the poem Mr Farnsley
"@Alien No, no its fine! This was really interesting to read. I tried to think of a suitable response for a while before replying.. I agree with that point, pre-set rules and guidelines are only there to be followed should you chose to follow them. (Forgive me if I've completely misinterpreted the point in your fantastic comment) I just felt like, upon writing this, that 'poetry' has always been, at least by myself, regimented by certain techniques and structures that one must follow for your..."
8 hrs ago
Ratthias
Ratthias posted a comment on frosty_the_lindo's profile
"Thanks for the favorite! :D I appreciate it."
8 hrs ago
CocaColaExecution
CocaColaExecution posted praise on the poem I Am Not Your Rabbit
"I love the imagery in this. Well done."
8 hrs ago
MossyMeadow
MossyMeadow posted a comment on Randomnese's profile
"No, I definitely didn't see it that way. Writers all have to work with the resources they are capable of using. Besides, many popular fictions from movies, books and video games can stem to some kind of inspiration. When writing my most recent piece, I thought of the character John Arnold from Jurassic Park, he just feels similar to the character I was writing. As a result, I opted to take advantage of this ever so slightly. As long as it's subtle and not a complete rip off, it's usually not..."
8 hrs ago
Nyxie
Nyxie posted a comment on Jezebel's profile
"Oooo"
9 hrs ago
thefutureisbright
thefutureisbright posted a comment on the work The strangest person I know is probably me.
"@Jezebel It sucks :( I haven't even opened my journal for fear that I'd end up throwing it in the bin if I tried to write. I've got no desire too- so why bother? haha! That's what I'm hoping, anyway. Once I can say so long to Physics at any rate! x"
11 hrs ago
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"@DamienLeniart Just finished reading your page, too! Ahhh, the wonders of music on writing. XD Thanks for posting! And haha, go to sleep then! REST YOUR EYEBALLS BEFORE THE WORLD EXPLODES. O.O x"
Yesterday at 2:06am
Alien
Alien posted a comment on the poem Mr Farnsley
"There is a comment I wanted to add here, at the risk of sounding like the pedantic ramblings of an ignorant. Please bear with me for a moment. The forms you refer to as "poems", you could think of them as a game, as the lines on the floor for a hopscotch. Like when Picasso decided to paint using only shades of blue, these are self-imposed restrictions: rules you would use only to play with. You may adhere strictly to one form, or you may break it at your convenience; you may regard it just as..."
Yesterday at 1:29am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on Jezebel's profile
"Gah, well, the page is posted, but needless to say, I'm thinking sleep might be in order haha"
Yesterday at 12:55am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on Nyxie's profile
"Guess what link I found on some random person's profile.... http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/mini-saga-challenge/159228"
Yesterday at 12:44am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on FantasyFictionWriter's profile
"Effie, long time! Everything alright? Well, I just came to ask if you wanted to add a page to an exercise I just started... http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos ... So if you like it and you find time to, be my guest! :D x"
Yesterday at 12:40am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on BasilWoodall's profile
"http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos Just felt like it would be your type of exercise... care to add a page? :)"
Yesterday at 12:38am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on neoHalcyon's profile
"By the way.... http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos I just posted this exercise, fancy joining in?"
Yesterday at 12:37am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on neoHalcyon's profile
"@neoHalcyon Yeah, so ask me whenever! :D"
Yesterday at 12:37am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on Nicah's profile
"http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos Hi, Nicah! Fancy joining in here? :) x"
Yesterday at 12:35am
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"@Jezebel Will do hahaha I just got done reading your page so yes, i shall add"
Yesterday at 12:35am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on the-ever-kid's profile
"http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos I want more people to add stuff, so do me a favor? :D x"
Yesterday at 12:35am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos Add a page? :D I just randomly decided to start it, soooo... :P"
Yesterday at 12:33am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"@DamenLeniart A state of inbetweetness, huh? ;) Cool. XD I'm in a mood of boredom!"
Yesterday at 12:33am
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on faucer's profile
"Okay, I was bored and started this exercise - The How To's. Here you instruct people how to do weird things. I wrote instructions on how to over-analyze. I think more people should give their ideas, so, add a page? http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/the-how-tos"
Yesterday at 12:32am
Divs
Divs posted a comment on Perplexingartist's profile
"I was just impressed by your work!"
Yesterday at 12:30am
Yesterday
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on CrystalRose's profile
"LOVE the quote. :3 x"
Yesterday at 11:51pm
DamienLeniart
DamienLeniart posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"@Jezebel Meh, I'm just in a mood where life is sorta like, boring and yet infinitely interesting."
Yesterday at 11:51pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on DamienLeniart's profile
"@DamienLeniart Uggghhhh, I really want to relax. WHY ARE EXAMS ALWAYS INTRUDING IN MY LIFE. And awwww. You're making me look forward for my twenties. *rolls eyes* ;)"
Yesterday at 11:49pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on the poem DeclarationMature
"(And now I have to wait two hours to recommend it. Great. *sigh*)"
Yesterday at 11:47pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a review on the poem DeclarationMature
"Seems like a pretty dark poem. You sound angry at the world and society for being so twisted. But I've never been the best at deciphering poetry, so maybe I'm wrong? The rhyming scheme is kind of random - first in a/a/b/b, then a/b/c/c/, and then another one. It doesn't fit brilliantly, but it doesn't fit badly, either Altogether, I quite like the poem. I think more people should help me decipher it! :D x"
Yesterday at 11:46pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on the work The strangest person I know is probably me.
"I think studying definitely squashes the creativity out of you - I have my exams in a couple of days, and my writing ability is practically zilch. Sigh. Hopefully, when the exams are over, we can get our heads back in to the Land of the Write. :D x"
Yesterday at 11:42pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on the story Home Remembered Not
"@JeromeR.Vandamme The song doesn't portray all of this, it just portrays a sad person. You don't need to listen to the song. :) Ahhh, yeah, I was just trying to fix around with some words in that sentence. Alright, I can try and find a better wording! :P In the second part, I kind of wanted to relate the confusion of the man because he didn't realize he was old. He thought he was still in his teens, and he didn't think of himself much as a man, so I didn't want to go straight on to calling him..."
Yesterday at 11:36pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted a comment on faucer's profile
"Well, everyone gets tired of studying sometimes. Hence why I'm not studying right now. :P Naah, I'll study in a little bit. Math exam on Monday. Oh, dear. *sighsssss* Haha, thanks! If they go well, I'll tell ya. XD"
Yesterday at 11:32pm
Jezebel
Jezebel posted praise on the exercise I'm Tired
"*squeezes in extra hug* I know how you feel, it happens to me all the time. I guess we just all end up bearing with it. :) Basically, this portrays my emotions exactly. It's blunt and simple and I liked reading so simple. Nice. :D x"
Yesterday at 11:30pm
neoHalcyon
neoHalcyon posted a critique on the poem Life's Rotten Lemons
"It's more of a personal thing, but I'd've liked it if it were stanza-organized. But hey, that's jut me. Other than that, j'adore, my friend!"
Yesterday at 9:40pm
Jamal
Jamal posted a comment on Jamal's profile
"hi"
Yesterday at 8:37pm
ANF
ANF posted a comment on ANF's profile
"@RavensPen, Thank you too! I really appreciate your comments on my work. It really means a lot! Hope to read more from you. :)"
Yesterday at 8:31pm
Hypaethral
Hypaethral posted a comment on Jasemi's profile
"Thank you so much for the fave and for taking the time to give our work a look!"
Yesterday at 7:30pm
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a tip on the story Rise of the Guardian's FansMature
"Nice nice. I like it. I would say though that it feels rather redundant to the actual movie. Add a little of your own twist to it, not just change the setting and stuff. It'll make the story more interesting and less predictable to people who've seen the movie before."
Yesterday at 7:16pm
frosty_the_lindo
frosty_the_lindo posted a comment on the page Sally: Surrounded by shadows in the story Jack Frost: The Second StoryMature
"@JackyFrost236 Lol. Thanks. It's been a long time since I've wrote this. I'm going to have to dig up some of my old stuff. But of course! I will. :D"
Yesterday at 7:06pm
Ty694
Ty694 posted a comment on the story Jet Black
"Hmph. Unfortunately, the site won't allow me to edit this chapter, thanks to some kind of...glitch, I guess? It wants me to re-enter my tags, but the tags slot doesn't have a text field for me to enter them in, thus rendering that impossible...ugh. Oh, well. First person can make for a decent intro before switching over to third, I suppose!"
Yesterday at 6:29pm
Ty694
Ty694 posted a comment on the story Jet Black
"@Ratthias Thanks for the advice! I could always try third person. I can work with either, but often find myself switching to autopilot and doing the first person. Thanks again, I'll try third person then."
Yesterday at 6:16pm
AlwaysADreamer
AlwaysADreamer posted a comment on LilyAvenue's profile
"hiii :)"
Yesterday at 6:08pm
neoHalcyon
neoHalcyon posted a comment on the story The Things They Abandoned
"@bartkc Not a problem. I just decided that since I posted something on the critique corner, I'd give someone else a critique as well. You are one after my own heart with description though -- enough to paint the enviornment, and make it really sparkle! I applaud you for that. :3"
Yesterday at 5:05pm
bartkc
bartkc posted praise on the page The Things They Abandoned - 2 in the story The Things They Abandoned
"@neoHalcyon Hey! Much appreciation for the critique... On the first page, I dig where you're going with the criticism of the flow. I will also see if I can't get a better description of Orlov. The plan was to make him another faceless drone of an expanding empire, as he's just another worker doing his job, but it might make for a better story if he has some sense of individuality. "Glowhead" is intended to be a slur for the race of aliens known as Celestials. In the perspective of this..."
Yesterday at 5:00pm
1234…12131415